A Love So Cold

Description

Winter and Love are the perfect pair.. Both are beautiful ,both are cold when they can be, and both hurt a lot when they want..

Is it possible for a person to experience winter inside out?

Well yes.. Jonghyun does suffer from it..

and the winter inside Jonghyun's heart will never be unthawed.. 

Foreword

Well this fic is dedicated to my awesomest unnie wyllaya ♥♥♥♥♥ she is a big time Jongyu fan and a angst maniac ♥ I told her i would write her one so here it is XD

I hope u will like this May ♥

I Love you~~~

 

A Special thanks to JinkiJeans♥ for proof reading this !!!!! I Love you unnieeee~~~~ ♥ 

U GUYS WILL STILL LOVE ME EVEN IF  THIS RIGHT??

comment and subscribe ♥ 

I Love ya'llll~~

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latifa1234 #1
Chapter 1: wawwwww c'est vraiment magnifique, mais c'est triste
lacus_clyne
#2
Chapter 1: nooo....this is broke my heart
why we always realize when it's to late
minatsuki
#3
Chapter 1: picks pieces of my shattered heart
WickedDemonAngel
#4
Chapter 1: Wow this is sooooo sad :(why you do this tokki! Uhg my heart. Jongs a big butthole treating jinki like crap. Jinki was always there for him when he came home and needed him but jong just used him. And I hurt so much when jinki was trying so hard to make things go back to normal but jong just wouldnt allow that to happen. Its like the beginning of the story makes it seem like they are made for eachother but jonghyuns inablity to love ruins everything. Uhg and then jinki just leaves everyone but I kinda dont blame him. I wouldnt be able to stay either. Im guessing he tried with tae but then left him? I wonder why. Poor jong hiding at the end. But it kinda serves him right for how much pain he caused jinki. Guess jinki cant be in total love with his girlfriend if its been established that jongyu were soulmates .
I hope u continue writing tokki! You're rlly good and u need to make your readers happy again xD
jhengchie
#5
Chapter 1: Though i hoped that they ended up together, the ending suited well with the theme. Jonghyun has obly his self to blame bec. Jinki did everything he could to make it work.

Good work on this authornim!
jinkijeans
#6
Chapter 1: There is so much I want to say about this. Don’t know where to start XD. First I want to say you get better with each story you write. And with this you can see how you have grown over the years personally and writing wise. You've learn to pour out your emotions in to your work to make it fit for the paring you're writing. I’m so proud of you. And that poetry-esque intro..*proud unnie feels* Jinki’s lone tear going down his cheek- oh god my heart. Jinki hiding his tears from puppy. Jonghyun’s wet peck after they made love. I started to get puddley-eyed right away, damn. XD….kekeke I see that ontae in there gurlfran *grins* kekeek Jelly Tae XD. I am so happy Jinki has a friend like Taemin in his life that would stick up for him. And Jonghyun deserved that crap from Taemin. * applaudsTaemin* I Felt so bad for Jinki there. I felt embarrassed for him and so hurt. *hugs Jinki* The slienct treatment and then Jinki getting so bad and yelling at him. Good for you Jinki, you have every right to let it out like that.
I felt Puppy’s feelz so much too tho.. He did it to himself :( . But I must admit I wanted to slap the poop out of him for making my Jinki cry kekeke XD. It’s sad in itself that he couldn’t let go trust and just love Jinki and see that he truly did love Jinki all along and that it would be ok. And then it was all too late and then guuuurl my tears and my heart ached for him at the end. I could feel his pain so much. You did an awesome job at angst tokki and making it sad. My heartstrings had to take a while to recover and I thought about the fic for hours afterwards just thinking about how their lives could have turned out if only Jjongie open his heart to Jinki long ago
ruiren
#7
Chapter 1: Ok this was so sad... I could feel my heart shattering into tiny little pieces. The important lesson I got from this is that love can never be taken for granted. Its sad how.one doesn't realize their own true feelings until its too late.

I love the way this story was written. You could feel the emotions that Jonghyun was feeling. The regret and sadness just literally took over him.

Love it!!!
wyllaya #8
Chapter 1: Ok first of all THANK YOU FOR MAKING THIS FIC FOR ME... i know youre not a big JongYu fan or even a fan of angst lol but you did it for your unnie and Tokki it was ing awesome JESUS CHRIST HOLY *will my comment get banned lol*
it was sad as just like i like it ...stupid puppy didnt take the chance at love that idiot and jinki was right there madly in love with him... i just loooooooove one sided love and even more when the other doesnt know DAAAAAMNNNNNN im not making sence but HELP ME GOD like what can i say i have no word i loooooved it... the sadness the angst even the way you described the beauty of winter and love tokki i can see that some real life experience made you stronger and you can now explain the pain a past love brings... oh oh i also want to say that it took me soooo long to read it because i was constantly rereading parts of it i just wanted to re live the emotion that part made me feel at that moment that for me only happens when im truly into a fic and it was so painfull to reread but at the same time made me feel so much emotions good and bad i ing love when that happens i must trully be an angst maniac cuz i love the feeling

P.S: im sure my comment is all over the place because i wrote it in one go and u refuse to reread it and make it ''clean'' i want my reaction to be raw

P.P.S: i love you my lil tokki bunny and please remind me again WHY THE YOU DONT WRITE ANYMORE ? LIKE FOR SAKE GIRLFRIEND THAT WAS BEYOND AMAZING