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Story Title: Trapped!.. In The Kingdom Of The Forbidden Romance
Author: Chae_Ri08
Genre(s): Fantasy, romance, drama
Brief Description: A prince's vow, a magician's curse, and a happily...  n e v e r  after?
While on a class trip to the museum, you, an ordinary high school girl, and Sunggyu, the popular class president/ your secret crush, are somehow taken back centuries in the past to a time where kings rule and magic exists. There, you find yourself as the Princess of the Daewon Empire and Sunggyu as her secret lover, whose tragic tale of forbidden love was never finished. Undeterred, you're determined to go back to your own life and time, but with Sunggyu's memories replaced with those of the princess' lover, how will you be able to?
Rated H: No
Reviewed By: Cherrycupcake
1. Title: [4/5 pts.]
I find it really unique but it’s slightly confusing.
2. Poster/Graphics/Background: [4/5 pts.]
The colours seem to relate to fantasy things and romance which I think is really good but the quality is a bit blurred/squashed.
3. Foreword/Description: [9/10 pts.]
I liked the fact you put a ‘teaser’ or ‘preview’ there, I found that really good because it gives the reader a chance to get to know what type of story this would be.
4. Plot: [30/30 pts]
It’s really unique, I absolutely love fantasy stories here on Asianfanfics and this one has become one of my favourites, I think the pendant is a huge bonus which has knocked your points up for me.
5. Flow: [5/5 pts.]
Your flow was near perfection.
6. Characterization: [4/5 pts.]
I like how you have singled each character out and wrote bits on each one even if they’re just minor roles in the story.
7. Grammar/Spelling: [20/20 pts.]
I couldn’t see any mistakes and everything made sense!
8. Overall Enjoyment/Entertainment: [18/20 pts.]
One of the best stories I’ve read so far and reviewed.
Total: Â [94/100]
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I've requested ^^
hellhathfury on says:
Hi, I'm curious, do you not review oneshots? Since in the rules it says to have at least 3 chapters.
l_kim96 on says about chapter 1:
I requested a review :D can't wait xD
carlafaaaaye on says:
Hi, I submitted a form weeks ago but I still don't see my story on the pending list?
LonesomeAngel on says:
I would just like to ask if you do review incomplete/still progressing stories? And do you review yaoi stories as well? (just to ask since some shops don't review such genre).
AznDuckies on says:
hello i have just requested a review lol. first time ever.
--iSoul on says:
um i was just wondering. i requested from quite a while back (lol no worries im not rushing you) but i see my story is listed to be reviewed by "BlankText". but when i came to her profile, it states that she's deactivated. does this mean my story isnt getting reviewed anytime soon?... ;__ ;
ljolson on says:
I requested a review~ Can't wait [:
Nicsnsd on says:
I submitted my request but don't see it in the list....
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Sent my request. Thank you in advanced! :D
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