The ones who watch the Watchers

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There are those who watch the world, watching to intervene, to correct. They are the ones who keep the world running, to keep the evil out and the good in.

Then, there are the ones who watch them.
 
WARNING: Character death (Past, but is narrated)
 
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[A/N: Written for Yeonah. Supposed to be her Christmas present but lolol late! This was written with the idea of 'watching the watchers'. Not a new concept, but meh. 

Foreword

He ran.

He hadn't run in a very long time. He hadn't needed to for a very long time. Sharpshooting had been his skill. He was the best, or so he'd liked to brag. His partner had often stated how unlikely that a hothead like him could be such an effective sniper, usually resulting in an epic tickle battle if possible, or at the least, snide snarking across earpieces when they were both supposed to be in hiding.

His partner, whom he'd been with since he'd been old enough to pick up a gun. His partner, who they'd both been hand-picked out and trained from equally tender ages, whom he'd have trusted with his life. That partner now had a gun aimed between his eyes by an unknown assailant, and everything he'd tried to do to help his partner had failed. The assailant seemed to be able to predict his bullets and avoid them with ease, and for the first time in his life, he'd run out of ammo.

He'd only brought the minimum he'd needed for a standard assignment like this. It was supposed to have been a simple assassination after all.

He was getting closer. Close enough that he could begin to see the features of his partner's face, even as harsh they were in the light of the dank street lamps that cast odd shadows onto everything they lit.

It must have been those odd shadows. For even as they both felt death drawing close, scythe aimed for the kill, his partner's eyes had met his, and an expression he could not recognized had crossed those familiar eyes, before they'd turned lifeless the split second the gunshot had sounded.

He heard someone scream as if from far away, not realising that that scream had torn itself from his own throat.

"Youngsaeng!"

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Bookworm01
#1
Chapter 2: Hey, I saw that you also made the story—Human unto Immortality! It was (and still is) a personal favorite of mine and I just stumbled into this one day, the same way I found your other story, before I realized that it was the same person. The style was similar so I was beginning to wonder why... Anyway, you don't need to know that. What you DO need to know is that you're an amazingly talented writer. *claps excitedly*
Gah! I so envy you right now... You're really good.
I don't envy the Watchers, the Auditors, not even the Secret Keepers. They're all involved in the business of life or death and that would just be tough to handle. Anyway, I feel that if I were Hyunjoong in this story, I would be really stressed. He was an auditor, a police officer and, you know, was trying to give Jungmin hints by still being a Watcher. So, all in all, in this story, he was doing three jobs. Just one question (or maybe two): does he have extra pay? I mean, all those hours... Surely, he had to have gained some more moolah. OTL orz I should be focusing on something else, like the story, but I couldn't help it. Unlike Jungmin, I DON'T have my priorities straight (at least, for now) and when I'm curious, I can't help asking the questions that bother me, even if I disrupt something else just because of it (curiosity killed the cat, after all—and I'm the cat...when it kills me, I just have to ask—that doesn't make sense). #2: Are there female Watchers/Auditors/Secret Keepers? Most of the characters I saw here were male and though I have no dislike when it comes to the opposite , it was just a question I had to ask. I mean, if they were all male, aww... Just aw.
Just a suggestion though (and not a very good one either): what if you put the scene the story revolves around in the beginning? I know, I don't make any sense. The main story is revolving around the death of Youngsaeng. If so, I want to see his last moments. TBC TT^TT
ping501
#2
Chapter 2: This is ones seriously awesome story. And I don't know how you made this. And I am surprised no one's commenting and commending you for such a wonderful job. sometimes I don't like silent readers, even if they do read your story. Your story made me think, suspicious, hurt, disappointed and happy in the end. Great job ^^