Chapter 1: this was cute!! it was a dream and stayed as a dream but who knows~ some dreams are meant to be real as you say xD thank you for writing this one!
Chapter 1: You're actually quite good as a beginner, you have nice writing skills and you're grammar is good :D, please write more ChoMi fics, there's a lack of it here in AFF even though I think ChoMi is the Apink vers. Of SNSD's TaeNy XD
But seriously, please continue writing :D
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