A Step Ahead

Description

Ontae one-shot! 

 

Happy New Year 2015! It's a brand new year and I hope y'all can look forward to a wonderful year with great adventures and great accomplishments!
 

(I hope I could say the same about myself! XD)

Foreword

Taemin's mother began chatting with the store owner, casually starting a conversation as her shopping was done for the day and that was the last stop. The five-year-old Taemin stood close to his umma, looking around the big shop. It was a new fancy bakery store in town and they were having a 'Grand Opening Sale' that attracted many housewives. But it was late in the day now, so much of the bread had been sold out when Taemin and his umma came.

 

The little boy was particularly fascinated with the whimsical bread names and all those tasty looking treats. But he was getting restless, wondering when the two ladies would end the small talk. Taemin started wondering around, began to learn the different types of breads to keep him occupied. He pointed at a particular one, didn't exactly know how to read its name.

 

"It's Ciabatta. Pronounced cha-BOT-a."

 

He his heel, startled at the voice above him. There stood another boy, probably a couple years older than him, looking down straight at him with a goofy grin plastered on his face. Taemin nodded meekly, embarrassed at his silliness.

 

"Annyeong, my name is Jinki!" The older boy said in a friendly tone, what made Taemin ease up.

 

"An-annyeong, I'm Taemin.” He replied statically.

 

"Nice to meet you, Taemin! Any bread you like here? My treat!" Jinki stepped down from behind the counter to approach the younger.

 

“A-ani, I’m not a bread person. My umma likes them though. I prefer meat!” He said triumphantly, showing the elder his little invisible muscles.

 

Jinki stifled a laugh and nodded his head, “Me too! I absolutely love chicken!”

 

The thought of fried chicken his mother promised him for dinner tonight made him drool and his blood pump.

 

"Jinjia? I'm related to chickens, my umma is too!" Taemin chirped excitedly, "Here, you can bite me for a taste-test."

 

Well...He'd somehow got confused with the fact that he was born in the year of the Rooster, not related to the actual birds. And his mother was twenty-four when she had him, so that makes her a baby in the Rooster year too.

 

Perplexed, Jinki bared his teeth at the outstretched 'chicken hand' and clamped his jaws down.

 

And that was how it all started –

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Dmat17 #1
Chapter 1: So sweet!! I love this. I'm all warm and happy inside. Just fantastic.
jinkijeans
#2
Chapter 2: aw so cute. Jinki teasing him at the end also very cute kekeke.
and i know what that is like taemin having a younger sister around when your with your date. *sighs* lol. i feel your pain Taemin XD
Dibidibidisn
#3
Chapter 2: Sooo is there going to beanother sequel for this sequel??? Because I really want to know whats going to happen next!
SHIN33ee
#4
Chapter 2: D'awwwww! Just too cute!!!
yesungie30 #5
Chapter 1: ,goodness!this is sooo sweeet,and,cheesy!- like it!
maryjae
#6
Chapter 1: ljxkgsjgwldulf i mean How adoooorable their meeting is!!! jinki biting him lmaoooo. really just too cute for words and also how teasing was jinki to make taem confess hahaha so presh.
yeaaaaaahhh totally go for a sequel or an epilogue TTTT
nomnomnomnomnomnom #7
Chapter 1: Aahhhh so cuteeee T.T
Dibidibidisn
#8
Chapter 1: Laughed at the art when Jinki actually bit Taemin... HHAHAH

UGGHHHH Jinki waiting for Taemin to just spill out his feelings for him... That was just the cherry on top of everything.
And OMG, they kissed! THEY KISSED!

This story is adorable, and the fluff at the end was just so perfect... <33333
jinkijeans
#9
Chapter 1: Kekeke, "mom, Jinki says he is hungry for chicken now" lol.
Jinki was smooth prying Taemin's co confession from him ;)
This fic is adorable XD...the perfect way to start off the new year: ontae sweetness :)