The Unforgiven Sin

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“You don't love someone because they're perfect, you love them in spite of the fact that they're not.”
― Jodi Picoult

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 Short Story 
The Unforgiven Sin 
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We are all sinful.

But there are some sins that people just can’t forget. There are some sins that are so bad that a punishment wouldn’t even suffice to make up for it.

When Olivia Kim came back from four years of juvie for her sin, she realized that her mistake wasn’t forgotten. Like bloody fingerprints left in a crime-scene, her crime left scars in many hearts.

Nobody forgot it. Nobody forgave her for it. Nobody cared to understand.

Not even her best friend, Mark Tuan.

It was demoralizing to know that the only friend she ever fully trusted didn't care about her anymore.

Because of one sin.

A sin done out of anger.

A sin done out of obedience and submission.

A sin done out of jealousy.

A sin done by a girl who was thought to be emotionless, but really, had so many emotions that didn't show.

 

 

“I do have feelings and emotions, Mark. I always did. I was just like everyone else! I got hurt and felt lonely, just like a regular teenager, but you were too focused on Jessica to realize that.”-Olivia

Foreword

Characters:

Mark Tuan

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Olivia Kim (OC)

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Jessica Koh

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Mino Song

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Hello my friends!! So I decided to write a short story about Mark (LOL! He's not even my bias, but I couldn't help it).

It'll be about 3-4 chapters. We'll see. Very short. But each update will be long.

God Bless You. :)

 

 

 

@ 00k88k from [click image to visit graphic shop] 

              

 


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Comments

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maiquie24 #1
Chapter 3: Wow. This story hits you hard. Great story btw!
Cherry14 #2
I've honestly been looking for this story for a year now. I remembered reading it but didn't remember the name and I realized I wasn't subscribed to it. On thus magical day I went to reread some of my old comments, stumbled upon You Are An Obsession reread the ending because it's night time and I felt the need to be depressed and bawl my eyes out. Then bam! This story was linked to the ending I read. Will subscribe now to avoid this problem in the future.
cece_mytlover
#3
Chapter 3: Still love this story :)
Akokbatarep #4
Chapter 3: Loss of words
isaisy
#5
Chapter 3: THIS IS GOLD! ♡♡
cece_mytlover
#6
Chapter 3: oh my gosh so touching and really really good!!!!
jackjackjackson #7
Chapter 3: I LOVE THIS *cries*
Yiyikyn #8
Chapter 3: Yay!!!*applause * PERFECT....:)