Gravity ☯늑댸☯

Description

So  i listened to Sara Bareilles song Gravity and decided to write sth.

Foreword

I didn't name none of the characters so you can decide on whose POV will it be.

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Liza_Blessedx2 #1
Chapter 3: A cliffhanger!!! So sad that this fic has been abandoned ..it has the potential to be a great one. ;(
Inscapez
#2
Chapter 3: Waiting *----* the fic is so good ♥♪
novasanb #3
Chapter 3: I really pity him whoever that is. Its really not healthy kind of love. One sided love is always sad. But please dont commit suicide...*sobs
_tattoorose #4
Chapter 2: Okay, wow. Your first person narrative is really great. You capture the emotions in a way that is natural. First person narratives usually feel a bit forced to me, but this one just flows. *sighs happily*
The fact that it really is impossible to determine in whose POV this is written has just further drawn me in. If there is one thing I am weak against it is ambiguities. Can't wait to read more~
yekyu3424 #5
Chapter 2: My brain (that have kyusung shipper in there) keep telling me this is Jongwoon POV XD
yekyu3424 #6
Chapter 1: Deep love~~~ but, a bit sad because he keep his feeling
Now, I am really curious whose POV in this chapter ><
Will wait patiently for next chapter. Fighting!!
Ps. I like your writing style :D