Chapter 18: Oh Jinki you ert bastard XD

He deserves to get punch with his last line

"...you don't have a PlayStation, do you..."
Taemin smiled sadly.
"I don't."

ing hell, this just about killed me.

Chapter 18: nice story and jongyu are the best!!!
did jonghyun just punched jinki in the face because jinki said something about other places??
well, jonghyun did a nice job in making the old man silent..
hahhahaha

Chapter 18: I really, REALLY could not pick whom to team for throughout the whole story. I'm a big OnTae fan but JongYu deserve happiness too! ><
I love the idea and how bumpy and real their love story was. Great job♡

Chapter 18: Whoa, great writing, great story. Read it in one go. Loved all the angst! Poor Taemin though.

Chapter 18: Woaaaaah. I have just finished read this story and in one go. It's really good. Why i didn't notice this one before. Ahh, thank you for creating very amazing story. ^^

Chapter 18: The last sentence nailed it WTF
and yeah. Throughout the fic I was PISSED at Lee Jinki. I mean heck yeah how could he hurt my poor bb princess Jjongie like that? //narrows eyes.
My sympathies on Sekyung and Taemin. Poor children ;^;
love this hoho pls update Nemesis mimesis. Im in love with ur works uwu

Chapter 18: good one, great job authornim ^^

Chapter 18: Yay!!!!!!!! I really loved this! The ending was great. I like so many parts and you had awesome lines throu out the fic. I really like you writing style. I kinda of feel sad for Taemin, omg!!! he doesn't have a playstation. He totally still loves Jinki :( Loved Minkey... Kibum is such a good friend. And the Jongyu was amazing, they really do fit each other.
Well done!

Chapter 1: Read the first chapter and now I'm hooked!!!!!