A Blessing In Disguise

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“What the…” she mumbled to herself, not able to process how her bullets suddenly froze to ice.

Xiumin smirked as he directed his open palm at her and froze her lower part of the body. He walked up to her while pretending to dust off dirt from his hands and said, “Well that was easy. But, your bullets were travelling approximately 3126 miles per hour. I didn’t expect that. It’s usually 1 563 miles per hour… Impressive.”

Luhan approached the two of them and stated, “Since you lost, you’ll be our hostage. You get me honey?”

 


 

Jung Jiyeon was the most powerful agent in the SHL Secret Agency. She had killed many people and made her Agency proud several times. Her aiming skills were excellent despite the fact that she holds her two pistols upside down. She stated that it was more comfortable that way. Jung Jiyeon was fierce during missions and she's always focused. There was no day where she had an incomplete mission. But that will all change.

On the day that her best friend and partner died, she was given another mission. It was to kill two powerful males that her co agent couldn't kill a few months back. Just by finding out the weapon that those two boys used was already helpful. But unfortunately, they weren't in need of weapons to be powerful.

Luhan and Xiumin were the names of the two boys that she were to kill. They were very powerful and they have killed many agents from the SHL Secret Agency and some other agencies that were partners with it. They also killed many people in the country and outside the country. They were clearly invincible.

For the first time, she lost a battle and became their hostage. The fierce Jung Jiyeon was long gone. It was replaced by an innocent and useless her. She was always fearful when her guns weren't with her. That's what exactly how she is ever since she became their hostage

Foreword


Character Chart is made by me

Here is a Luhan, Xiumin and OC fanfic :) I'll be honest, I fell for Xiumin a few days back. I can't believe I didn't notice his cuteness! Okay, done with the fangirling. I was inspired by The Blood Brother Code written by an amazing author Korekrypta. She writes the plot really well and her language is amazing. I honestly feel envious of her writing. It's too nice xD

Important note: I update in a constant pace. Usually, I update during weekends when I'm free. It depends on my schedule actually. But nonetheless, I hope you would give me support till the end :)



Scored 66/100 in BLK's Review Shop
I need to improve on my story ._.



Thank you so so much to CKND Graphics
for the amazing poster


 Please do enjoy reading this fanfic :) I have worked hard on it compared to other stories that I have written. Also, Please subscribe and comment! I love getting feedback for my stories.

MinHee_Exotic
Mid Year exam season! Which means late updates T^T

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nieltaeminlover18 #1
Chapter 12: NO, DON'T LEAVE!!! This is a really great story and I love it so far. I really like the plot and how it's twisting out. So please keep writing! *bowing and begging on my knees*
Bleak_night #2
Chapter 12: Hey... I don't no whose there bashing but i want you to check these two links okay, maybe then you'll get my point.
My first review

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/911588/19/ros-e-review-shop-close-editing-shop-hiring-beta-readers-reviewshop

And seconds

http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/911588/34/ros-e-review-shop-close-editing-shop-hiring-beta-readers-reviewshop


please i only did what they asked me in my first reviews, i tried my best to not do the same mistakes... Please check it out and tell, i want an immediate answer if thats possible Z... Please...
Bleak_night #3
Chapter 11: Honestly, i personally find it unique, Afterall the more you write the more you learn, the more better it became. I mean just write, it'll take a time but its practice... You i use to be like you, but there was this reader... Who always encourage me and told me that I'll learn with time... I get a one comment in two chapters... But now its different well not that good just a step better... So don't lose hope and write and about review shop... This is the place where you could get a best advice... What they told you, take it positive and see where the mistakes are and change them then again in next story, it'll better then the previous, believe me and just write, fighting! :)
BrightestStarLuhan
#4
Chapter 11: Aww... Don't be discouraged!
Your story is really nice! <3
Bleak_night #5
Chapter 10: Hmm so they find out but i wonder how they'll stop Mr Lim from being a principal... This is exciting...
Bleak_night #6
Chapter 9: Who is he? I think its the robot? Wow jealousy Luhan is manly hehehe, he's cute.
Bleak_night #7
Chapter 8: Baekhyun is funny being a trouble maker with Chanyeol but i really hope she could end with Luhan Z, Xiumin is quiet scary when he's mad anyway Z its okay study comes first...
BrightestStarLuhan
#8
Chapter 8: Don't feel bad Z ~ :)
I'll support this story till the end!
Fighting! ^^