16 Steps

Description

 

 

The human brain think

of an average of

2500-3300 thoughts per hour.

Estimatedly 41-55 thoughts per minute.

 

All it took was 16 steps; 

29.92 dragging seconds

for him 

to make a decision.

And choose

whether to break a broken heart

or

patch it all up together.

 

 

 

Foreword

I am not going to go against the weight of the future                 

                                                   for it is much heavier than the present.

And I am certainly not going to go against the theory of relativity.    

                                           What lies ahead of time itself,

is something no man can explain but I’ll risk my present,                 

                                                                            my past and I’ll risk everything for both of us.

 

 


 

 

 

The story starts with an argument of two best friends in the girl’s apartment. The plot however may confuse you as it is in the male lead’s point of view. It is in general, what he is thinking while walking away from the girl’s apartment. He’s basically in a state where he THINKS the world is in a slow motion perception. So this story tells you bit by bit of what he is thinking in exactly 29.92 seconds. What he is thinking however, is in a flashback of what happened between the two protagonists. And it will change at the end as you read through it.

 

 

 


 

 

 

Millions of thanks to these awesome postermakers,

@Kwons- ; ▌sintaxe.co 

@machxxx

 

 

Before you read though, extremely long chapter ahead. 

Thank you and please do subsribe, comment

and upvote :) 

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dae0921
#1
Chapter 4: oh my god so beautiful ❤
icaaaj #2
I am once again speechless. You have a way with words, idek how to describe it but I love it soooo much. You got me hooked again, please continue writing awesome stories. Fighting.
fatinkyung
#3
Chapter 1: This is so good....thanks for this wonderful 16 steps dear author
bigbangisloveee
#4
Chapter 1: Oh my god! This is soooo freaking good. Omfg. I am speechless. You are a great author! <3
ChenBeMyTroll #5
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ExoticShawolinSpirit
#6
Chapter 2: yeah, you should make her POV! :D I'm curious now hahaha
ExoticShawolinSpirit
#7
Chapter 1: I've never read something so short and beautiful as this. The way you wrote his flashbacks along with the present was so perfectly fitting. Oh my god that ending, too. I don't even think I have the right words to describe how much this got to me. I'm in love with this story. And I wish I could find a love like theirs T-T Jongin is so sweet !! Thank you so much for a wonderful story. I really like how you used the fact about the amount of thoughts we have in a certain amount of time. How did you come up with the idea?? It's brilliant!! :D hahaha I look forward to reading more from you(: