Of Christmas Lists and Courtship

Description

 

Wherein Luhan is looking for a gift.

 

Foreword

 

Title: Of Christmas Lists and Courtship

Pairing: Kai/Luhan

Rating: PG-13

Word count: 5,496

Summary: Luhan is desperate to have his Christmas gift, even if it means getting rejected by Kyungsoo.

A/N: An early Christmas gift? Haha why is it so hard to make fluff? Anyways, to all those who’s been so dearly following my oneshots and giving me feedbacks and upvoting my stories, I want to thank you all.

PS: I would like to dedicate this one to @kikicarolinajung for making me excited and worked up over this one. I know I originally told you that it’ll only be 2-3k but boom! I got carried away and I just hope you’d also like this one. Anyways, thank you again for the encouragements.

 

Now, let me hide.


 

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asphodelblossoms
#1
Read this again on Christmas Day. It felt like coming home or something ❤
windupheart #2
Chapter 1: [2]

I enjoyed reading about Sehun and Lu Han as best friends ["best friends"? LOL] here. Their banters draw out the kid in Lu Han, which is also resonant of their RL interactions. I do like how you write Sehun in your fics, in general; he can be infuriating with his brattiness, but he also shows a surprising level of maturity than what he's given credit for. Although he's showcased more of his brattiness than his maturity in this fic, but at least he wasn't intolerable to read about ^^;

To be honest, I was wary of the "Kyungsoo is the spawn of the devil" trope used here because I'm personally not a fan of it [and fandom has a way of running things into the ground that it either gets old fast or become overdone], so I was more worried about his characterization compared to the rest. But I'm glad the way you wrote Kyungsoo wasn't too exaggerated, and even if there were some parts that almost crossed that dangerous line, you managed to hold it back. I just wish you had expounded more on why Lu Han is very wary of Kyungsoo; I feel like there should've been a detailed backstory inserted somewhere but went missing ^^;

All in all, this was truly a wonderful read, the perfect fic the holidays [and an early Christmas present for Lukai shippers, too!] ^^ I laughed so much from beginning to end, mostly because of Lu Han's woes, but those precious Lukai moments you included made me warm and fuzzy X3 Also, my apologies in advance for this disjointed comment u__u I might not hear any church bells ringing when I re-read this fic, but I can imagine Lu Han and Jongin snuggling together in bed, or sitting in front of the fireplace while drinking hot chocolate. Thank you so much for writing and sharing this, it is definitely much appreciated! ^o^
windupheart #3
Chapter 1: [1]

Hello ^^ This isn't the first time I've read your fics, but this is the first time I am leaving a comment~

I am amazed on how Lu Han's mind works here. I am guessing it was fascination at first glance that made him decide he wants Jongin as his Christmas present. It's a really outrageous idea, but one that oddly makes sense at the same time; like Lu Han said, everyone starts as strangers, and you do find love in the most unexpected of places sometimes.

And Jongin, please, of course you would be happy receiving a bucket of chicken for Christmas LOL. Just don't be too much of a brat towards Lu Han; the epilogue had me feeling bad for laughing at the turn of events, and all because of a pair of movie tickets from his best friend that might be lost forever ^^;

I like Lukai's dynamic here: Lu Han making the first move to reach out while Jongin receives and reciprocates by indulging his hyung is quite resonant of their RL interactions. Lu Han's persistence in chasing Jongin and the tactics he used had me both laughing and suffering from secondhand embarrassment; you know what's going to happen, but you still can't believe it did, and even if you tell yourself to look away, you just can't LOL. On the other hand, I see you, Jongin, playing hard to get when it's already obvious you've been won over. He probably just wants to see his hyung suffer, but I guess there's always the fun of rewarding him with a kiss or a hug or just simply allowing Lu Han to cling to him because he not-so-secretly likes it, too X3 Jongin's lucky Lu Han likes him too much to stand his conditions, but it's only a matter of time before Lu Han will probably smack him LOL.
lorcaclea #4
Chapter 1: Early christmas gift!!Yay!! Love the fluffy KaiLu.♥♥♡♥♡♥♥
deerestkrrong
#5
Chapter 1: okaaaaay fluffy kailu is really the best!!! thank u for this and merry christmas to youuu xxx
kikicarolinajung
#6
Chapter 1: this is so sweet! tbvh i've read this yesterday but im running out time so i have to delay my comment because too many feels you knowwww
thank you so much for this, you are so woderful and kind! i'd marry you if i can, i mean omg you granted my wish and this oneshot is perfect!
luhan is definitely my favorite! he is so bluntly wonderful lmao
and jongin sigh, he was cool okay but who can resist someone like luhan? kkkk
and sehun, uou potray him just like oh sehun we knew lmaoooo crazy bastard yet so warm inside
and playing hard to get jongin is just too precious!
if luhan had jongin as his christmas gift, i thank you so much for this! kkkk
i love you and please dont forget about what i told you bfr, so many people came to read your story but few of them are so stupid to not leave any trace
keep writing, and happy christmas! ily! <3
dearestnini
#7
Aww so cute! Lukai christmas!au is so adorable and yes, I love the evil Soo and how you showed the undying friendship and brotherhood of Sehun and Luhan (yes, as sarcastic it may seem) LOL and how Luhan is so stubborn (for his love for Jongin).

Definitely love this oneshot ;u; suited my likings and just the right amount of fluffiness. Thank you for sharing this story ;A; (even if they said there's no more KaiLu and it's hurting me bec Lu left). I hope you'll write more KaiLu fics in the future please! <3
willswhisp #8
A cute little christmas themed lukai. Ahh <3 thank you! And let me just tell you that I adored spawn of satan kyungsoo! evil soo is my weakness :)
fluffyns #9
SO CUTEEEEE ㅠㅠ
thank you! ♡
Kamira #10
Chapter 1: That was really cute. Thanks for sharing it.