Chapter 1:
Okay, so just a suggestion: can you put the song with your author's note, above the chapter divider (or whatever it's called) instead of below it? It interrupts my reading a little bit. I don't really know much about Taehyung (except that he looks like the son of Baekhyun and Daehyun and that his smiles are wonderful...that's what they say !?(･_･;?) but I feel the same as any other fan in this universe (because, you never know, maybe there's some kind of alien fan out there who I don't really know). That feeling of being just one in a million and not the good kind—the heartbreaking kind. Us fans really experience that and when I was new to K-Pop, I was too sensitive about things (I cried over my idols but that happens less often now) and would cry when I heard their songs because it hurts. It hurts to know that you know someone (I don't love them; infatuated, maybe?) who will never see you the way you do them. I learned to accept the truth as life went by. Someday, they'll be happy and I'll be happy but I'll never forget the ones who touched my heart for a few years, who hurt me unknowingly and so on... They'll be someone I'll never forget.
Okay, so I'm being all deep and stuff so I'll stop (cause we all know where this is going).

P.S. I want to sincerely show you something. Back when we were new to K-Pop (okay, OFFICIALLY a fan because K-Pop was really big in our country years ago but we were only into it just recently), my best friend showed me this vid that had the both of us crying. IN PUBLIC (okay, so that was embarrassing so let's not delve into this memory deeper, alright?). Yeah, we were really crybabies because again, we were new to...you know. (._.) Here's the link:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cv89eATV-tk
I don't know if this will make you cry too for I was only a crybaby then because I was new. Now I'm strong. ＼(^o^)／