Hamartia [EDITING]

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"To love at all is to be vulnerable" 

---- C.S Lewis

 

Seventeen year old Joeun knew she had a gift. 

She destroyed, and yet she healed. But she never understood why.

That was until she rescued a distressed boy that gave her pain she had never felt before whenever he touched her. 

 

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Foreword

Joeun's eyes widen when she felt his touch. Her skin became hot, as if her veins had been electrocuted. The sudden pain made her winced and she immediately pulled her hand away. 

His hand hung mid-air, as he stared at her in confusion. "What's wrong?" 

"N-nothing." she stuttered. The pain was slowly bubbling within her, making her breath coming up in gasps. 

"Joeun-" he started, and held her shoulders firmly to keep her from moving away. At an instant, his touch sent a burning sensation to her skin that propelled her to scream in utter pain. She cried out again as she pushed him away and staggered backwards. 

"Stay away from me!" 

"What?" his eyes remained perplexed---his soft blue eyes that appeared like azure water reflecting the skies---were almost a comfort for her if it wasn't for the monster he was slowly turning into in her eyes. 

She was scared, terrified of him. Because she had never felt pain in her whole life. And this was the first. 

He was the cause of it. 

 

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(I am truly thankful for all the reviewers for taking their time to read my story and give me their honest opinion and help me improve. Do check them out!)

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marvelark
22/1 - updated Hamartia :) do leave comments and tell me what you think!

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Icanbecool #1
Chapter 3: Can't wait for the next chapter, already loving this story!
-Anita
#2
Chapter 5: You did leave me with more questions... >_>
LuluLover77
#3
Chapter 5: Wah!!! That was some interesting chapter.....
dolce-peach
#4
Chapter 5: Ohhh kyungsoo getting protective lol
can't wait for the next update~~~
-Anita
#5
Chapter 4: Must be confusing as hell - for all parties.
dolce-peach
#6
Chapter 3: Yay wonderful update!!
Sehun just cracks me up haha XD
-Anita
#7
Chapter 3: He isn't very tactful, is he? *rolls eyes*
UbiquitousFriend
#8
Chapter 3: Could you set the font body back to normal? Its too small to read on my phone
rasyajung #9
I like the plot and the story seems interesting. Looking forward for the next chappie~
springjasmine91
#10
Chapter 3: Well u deserve dumb jongin. Fighting for the next chapter