Blackest Friday

Description

The one day where money doesn't matter and you are able to obtain a specific number of items, free of charge, if you can survive everyone else and make it back before time is up.  It's the only option for Minsoo, Byunghyun, and Jonghyun when one of their friends needs medicine none of them can afford.  Without it, he will die, but the challenge to obtain the cure might be more dangerous still.

Foreword

The world is often a brutal and unforgiving place and as time progressed, society began to change accordingly to reflect their wants and desires.  With the majority of the populous focused on material wealth, over the years, the barriers between the classes began to fall apart, slowly but surely.  The true colors of people of all races and means were never revealed more clearly than on Black Friday: the day after which we were supposed to be most thankful for what we did have.

En masse, the majority of the populous would flock to the stores for the best deals, often fighting their fellow man for mere material goods and the promise of a cheap sale.  With the advance of technology and the growing number of people, the yearly occurrence became increasingly violent, punctuated by more injuries and deaths every cycle.

With tensions growing on all sides, the walls between classes finally snapped and chaos broke out on a worldwide scale.  In the year 2068, hundreds of thousands died or were killed in the efforts to gain control of the situation.  It became known as the Sundering and it was only the beginning of a new era for people everywhere.

After the madness was calmed and the day past, it was announced there would be no more Black Friday.  No more sales.  No more goods to be acquired cheaply: for anyone.

In theory, it was the perfect solution to a terrible problem, but humans are creatures of habit and privilege, if nothing else.  For those whose only recourse to greater items of material worth were such sales, this was a terrible sentence; one that greatly favored those who already had the means to acquire more.  The following year, when the worldwide ban of Black Friday was invoked, the poor rioted.  They tried to take what they believed they still had a right to and those of the middle and upper class were in mortal danger for it.

Defense forces were marshalled to protect the citizens and businesses and quell the outraged masses.  With losses to human life and businesses across the world, the day was survived, but unrest continued.  Despite their best efforts, the unified leaders of the world could not divert the people from the current path they were on.  A new one had to be forged.

So they gave the people what they wanted, though not in the way they expected.  Cities were chosen worldwide as the hosting points where, on one day each year, several valuable items would be made 'available' for no cost.  These arenas were walled in to better control the surge of people seeking such wealth.  A list of items was generated and made available to all so they could see what things they could win for their efforts at no monetary cost to them.

But nothing is ever truly free.

The first run proved to be a violent and bloody afair, nearly as catastrophic as the original riot in which even those not participating in the event, though still within the arena, were adversely affected.  A system had to be put in place.  Rules and regulations were established.  Competitors had to register beforehand and strictly enforced time limits and boundaries were imposed.  In order to make the event run smoothly and gain funding for such a happening, the government commercialized it and beseeched funding from the wealthy.  Feeding into the bloodthirsty nature of our ancestors, the event was broadcast live so that those who were not participating could watch from afar as the participants fought each other for the items they so desperately wanted in a harsh mockery of the original happenings during that day.

In the year 2072, after the system was firmly set in place, the newly deemed worldwide event was announced:

   Blackest Friday   .

It is now 2083 and another such day approaches, bringing with it the promise of wealth, danger, and salvation alike.

For one such group of motley friends, it also means life for one of their own.  They know the event is more akin to that featuring the gladiators of old, but for those intent upon facing such danger, it is a risk they are willing to take.

 

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Amber_Sica
#1
Chapter 7: WOW this story was SO COOL. Great job with finishing it, I really enjoyed it!
kaseyslove
#2
Chapter 6: Contrary to your thoughts about that actually more less would have been disappointed if it had been anything less then what you did..

That sounds backwards I know but the way you paid his character for him to let you know the other to get hurt as badly as he was was highly unlikely and if he did it would be worse than him getting hurt himself because I said how much he cares about them and the other two would feel bad about him being hurt but at the same time cap feels better that it's him and not them because in a sense he knows that he's able to handle it more than they are is what I really get from his characters so that's why I say I would have been disappointed if it was anything less than the brutality that happen and then let me say just damn.. O.o

I was pleasantly surprised that L'joe had managed to get a valcher. When a while without seeing him but I figured I was like if anything he won't stay there cuz I know you wouldn't dare so much I knew. And I don't know if it was just me but it felt like we had a capJoe moment and that made me smile of course cuz I ship it.

I was also happy that he had the voucher because I honestly did not think they would be able to take anymore just battle battles inside the building especially for just one of the many that was in the bag.

Now we'll say I was surprised that the others had been on the other side of the fence but at the same time I shouldn't been surprised because they were all too hella agitated to really just a watching it on TV.

The last bit of the fight had me go and please don't please don't kill somebody even though she said she wouldn't say please keep your promise and don't like completely and utterly just had somebody die. And was only momentarily distracted with the epic and heart wrenching scene between Niel and Changjo.

And you already know I was going to say something about the cliffhanger but you it was a nice place to end the chapter.
-Tigress-
#3
Chapter 7: Okay yes. Let's see. Gather my thoughts.

As I already mentioned, the characterization was really really well done. The action (ahem, violence) was nicely qritten, had me on the edge of my seat fearing for them but it wasn't over the tip bloody like a story like this could have gotten. It was really managed nicely and I could envision it all! The table surfing was an awesome addition and the truce was actually nice to see; people coming together momentarily for a bigger cause. If only auch a world didn't have to exist!
I was supremely terrified at the end of the last chapter there, and I too want maybe a sequel? Just something explaining more of this world you've built. While it's nicely explained for the context of the story, this world feels like one that could stretch over stories, each time telling something new. Very cool setup and I very much enjoyed reading this! And I'm super happy you found the time to be able to finish it off. Congratulations!
-Tigress-
#4
Chapter 6: "Sort of a cliffhanger"?!?! My heart is in my throat.
-Tigress-
#5
Chapter 5: OMG. Like honestly its hard to form words. That was terrible! But so well written. But terrible! Gosh, its how Changhyun described it: a horrible need to watch. Like, the story is captivating and I literally could not walk away from this right now even if I HAD to. Thankfully I don't. Onward! (holds breath)
-Tigress-
#6
Chapter 3: OMO TENSION.

The way that you've built the characters and their relationships is really nice. I admit that when I realized that you'd be switching  POVs, I was worried about the characterization, but I really shouldn't have been. I mean, come on, it's your writing we're talking about here! =D  And true to usual, your characters shine! The stark differences you've painted between them all, the hints of backstory for some and the blatant pain of others, it's really REALLY well done.
Minsoo is a fantastic older brother here and you're setting up the scene really well. I can practically see the whole thing, the examination tents, the towers, it's all vivid. And totally creepy in a way! It's like Hunger Games+ The Purge in one and yet with an added sort of desperation to it!
Next chapter!!!
-Tigress-
#7
Chapter 2: Well well. I remembered the first chapter better than I thought I had, but I forgot all about the Elyixur and the bands. I'm super glad I decided to re-read these so I could refresh! LOL. Moving onward!
-Tigress-
#8
Chapter 1: It's been a while since I've read this and so I need to start from the beginning. So here we go!
kaseyslove
#9
Chapter 5: So I do promise to come in tonight I did not get to read the newest update yet but I was not going to go out on my promise again cause I did forget yesterday.

As I've already said the brutality of it all is this mind-numbing the way you could describe it really just makes me feel like I'm watching it happen and seeing the anguish on their faces when everything just kind of hits the fan even though they knew was going to hit the fan but then really then witnessing it hit the fan it's definitely a fit because I see it and then Poor changjo about to throw up but can't even manage that before getting yanked into a whole nother hole.

Then you have L.joe and that was just as bad with the y traps and him barely having his saved by in the adrenaline and I felt bad for him when other people were his friends. Only to find out he's not and how to kill somebody else to make sure they don't kill you and then you getting trapped under Rubble.

No one thing I didn't expect was a lockdown on all that cool okay lockdown what in the world is she going to do now is pretty much what went through my head and then when you went back to the others watching them on TV you could just feel the tension and it made me giggle just a little bit because I can't Niel driving the other two completely crazy and then just wanted to tell him to hush.

Overall of course another also update and I look forward to reading the other chapter tomorrow so look out for a comment tomorrow because I'll be off and I'll be able to put one the same day unlike this time. :)