Chapter 1: so, just like the other fics I've subscribed and read, I forgot to comment on this one, so I re-read and even tho I know I'm bad at handling angst fic
this is so sad tbh. they actually could have a happy life (minus their parents threats), and they actually still loved each other (at first I thought Luhan didnt feel the same)
I'd like to think that they're in heaven, living a happy life there T^T dont mind me
Thanks for this story tho
Chapter 1: Erm
Erm
I still dun lyk hunhan
Erm
Erm
U ain't makin me
Nuh uh
Never
Dun try
Start liking VIXX pls
Pls
Pls
Im the only starlight left
And also
Start listenin to B1A4
Esp watch their hello baby
Embarrasing s
Rly embarrasing
The definition of stupidity
Like rly stupidity at its finest
Hahaz im spammin
But i aint gon maintain
Maintenance a to be
So dun maintain n defy Su
Lolz
/shot
Chapter 1: SCREAMS
RAGES
EJAJSKSJSBSNAKSNSBSBS
WHO ARE YOU
are you trying to make me sad on crysmas how dare you
okay, that being said, i really loved the simplicity or the story. it's straight to the point, and i think your english is lovely! the perspectives were nice—i always love looking at two sides of the story—and wowbhwalbekwv that near-last lineee.
"he was going home." sOBS BUT BUT DEATH IS NOT THE ANSWER WKAHHS THEY COULDVE BEEN LIKE "HEY LOVE LET'S RUN AWAY" bUT NOOOO STUPID LUHAN'S PARENTS >:( i swear sehun seriously needed a dose of Taylor swift [speak now really resembles the scenario]
okay sorry for my mini ramble-rant; btw, were you inspired by K.Will's please don't? it vaguely vaguely reminds me of it. ^^
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