미친: Psycho
Description
Mamaverse: When everyone else has given up on Sehun, it's up to Lay to figure out why he's attacking the group, and find an alternative way to fix the situation before it's too late.
Foreword
~*~ This is the third poster done for me by NominalDesigns. Her shop is relatively new, and I cannot recommend her more highly. ~*~
~*~ A very in-depth review was done for this by eleutheromaniac at Kodawari Reviews! I really admire this shop for not being afraid to tell you exactly where you can improve. ~*~
8/10/15 Note: The review I received made it very clear that this story requires a lot of revamping in order to be an enjoyable read. I'll admit, I've been writing EXO fanfiction since December of last year, and the entire time, due to medication, my mind has not been clear enough to write a good story, and on top of that I stopped reading as much (when I read I write better,) but I had ideas, so I wrote regardless. When I compare this to things I used to write (my fic Fantastic Euphoria is an excellent example of how I used to write,) I always feel disappointed. Honestly, what I should do is take a hiatus from AFF until my mental fog clears completely, but I don't want to leave stories unfinished.
Revamping isn't something I have the will to do in full at this moment, but it is something I will be working on at various times. My first priority at the moment is finishing all of my fics.
My first round of revisions will focus on smoothing out dialogue and adding explanations. The second round will continue to refine the dialogue and explanations, and make an attempt at adding individuality to the characters.
This fic's status: Round 1, revised up to Chapter 3.
About the Fic:
Warnings for this fic include: Violence; dubcon mentioned VERY briefly (Ch. 10); swearing.
This fic may or may not be considered AU depending on how you think of the Mamaverse.
As for pairings, this story won't have any, but there is some TaoHun, KaiSoo, and BaekYeol friendship that you can probably interpret that way if you'd like. Other friendships may be added depending on my mood.
Enjoy in moderation!
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