Unwanted Mate

Description

Do Kyungsoo is excited to meet his mate but what happens when his mate is the exact opposite.

His mate, Kim Areum, doesn't even want to be near him.

She doesn't want to see him, be beside him or even touch him.

What will Kyungsoo do? Will he make her fall in love with him or will he just leave her?

 

Foreword

Trailer

 

https://vid.me/AvCq

 


 

Character Description

 

Main Characters ~ 


Kim Areum (Portrayed by Seo Yu Na)

     

Cold and mean on the outside 
Bad and fast temper
Cute and funny on the inside 
Doesn't want a mate

 

D.O (Do Kyungsoo)                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       

 Funny and weird           

Next Alpha in line

Excited to meet his mate


Ravi (Kim Won Sik) 

Cold and mean
Only nice to Areum (sometimes Jongin)

 

Kai (Kim Jongin) 

Funny, approachable and has a warming-heart

 Brother of Kim Areum 

Found his mate

Alpha of his own pack
Disapproves of Won Sik

 

A/N : This is my first fanfic and I hope you like it. Be sure to comment, upvote and subscribe. I have another FanFic with AnnieWilson, make sure you check it out! It's called Rebel! I am now working on making a poster and a trailer so stay with me. Hope you like this story and comment if any spelling mistakes!

 

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Bookworm01
#1
Chapter 9: Okay. Okay. I think things are heating up with Kyungsoo and Areum. If it's true that if he so wished, the male mate can find another mate, why does Kyungsoo choose to stay with Areum?
Personally, I think if Areum thinks she's no longer in love with Wonsik, why choose to resist what is inevitable? Why not give in to her Wolf and try to just enjoy the feeling of having a mate? Or is it because if she does, she'll lose her own human free will, the one that wants something more out of life than having to be around their mate all the time?
Also, what IS up with Jimin and the rest? Are they spies? Or worse, wolves? Why are they around Areum if they are? Are they supposed to low-key watch her without her getting too suspicious? Or is it just a coincidence that they may be wolves and may like Areum in that way because she knows herself and her body and is confident and that is beautiful in their opinion? Why? Ugh, I really want to know. (*^*)
Anyway, long time no see. I've missed being on AFF. I had a rough phase this time last year and the last thing I wanted to do was read but you know... I'm back! Hope you decide to continue this, writer's block or no. I think this is a really great story and I'm curious as to how you want it to end or what choices/paths you'll write for our beloved characters. Don't worry. No pressure and no rush. Just continue on writing. I'm sure you'll find something to inspire you. Maybe fellow writers can indirectly help you to figure it out by you reading their stuff. Sometimes, I think, it's nice to be just a reader consuming all these artists' works. You even get an idea or two if you're lucky. ;-) Good luck! Hope whatever you're going through is sorted out and wrapped in a neatly presented ribbon too. <(^.^)>
little_mochi
#2
when will you update.. :'( i miss this story
shooploop #3
Very interesting!
AnnieWilson
#4
Chapter 8: I'm excited to see some drama with Wonsik. Areum is very relatable in the sense that she knows she's got it going on and she knows when to admit that the boys around her are super attractive.

Coz I mean, it's obvious.

I like her. I want to see more Kyungsoo but also more Wonsik...
Bookworm01
#5
Chapter 4: I like Areum so far. I only dislike that she didn't try reasoning with them about food or ordering them to come with her to buy food. Surely, that would've been far less violent and wouldn't get her in trouble with her parents. It would have also saved her energy and not wasted time. That was probably the only action I disliked her doing. If they still valiantly denied her permission to go out, even with their company, then that's the time for her to pop out the moves. Crack some knuckles and then hit them with all she's got. Or not. Eh, it's not a war so I guess not.
I think now that she's met her true mate, she'll get confused. Her feelings will get all mixed up. In all that confusion, she will start to use (or meet with) Ravi (or Wonsik) more and more until she finally understands that it was Kyungsoo all along. Alternatively, it could be the other way around. What if she truly loves Wonsik? I'm hoping she fights for the person she truly loves.
What about Kyungsoo? Doesn't Areum ever consider that she's hurting him in more ways than one (or will hurt him)? He's such a sweetheart and I fear that he can possibly become a bad guy if he takes too much pain from Areum.
Hm... I wonder about the Wolf District. Sure, right now, they're lying low but I believe it's because they don't see Areum as a threat...yet. Once she rebels (if ever she does) and chooses to stay with Wonsik, they might lock her up in a prison or something. Maybe to ‘detain’ her and ‘discipline’ her (or to let her reevaluate their values). I truly believe the Wolf District will be one of the antagonists in the story, just not right now. (Or not ever. :-P)
Good job! Keep it up! Thank you for writing this wonderful story! ^o^
P.S. Um, you said in one of your author's notes to tell you of any spelling mistakes so that's exactly what I'll do. The only spelling mistakes are the names of Areum and Kyungsoo. They become Aruem and Kyunsoo... I'm really sorry for doing this. :-(
zhenzhen12 #6
Nice story^^
rilopezl
#7
Chapter 1: liking the story so far, i woukd really like to hear her pov on this part it would be great :)
AnnieWilson
#8
http://i.imgur.com/aWPSZpc.jpg
I made a poster for you! Hope you like it :)
AnnieWilson
#9
Chapter 1: Looking good so far! I'll be keeping a close eye on this fic and I hope it goes well for you ^-^
Well done, sis! Keep it up and you'll rack up subscribers and upvotes in no time. Hwaiting!