Losing the love of his life was the thing that shocked Himchan the most. He hadn’t expected her to die in a sudden car crash. That night his girlfriend had passed away, his everyday wasn’t the same without her.
Chapter 1: Great writing style, though the end is not as believable considering the stages of grief he ignored. All it took was a brief explanation and no crying? Improbable. Although, I later assumed that due to his closed-off personality, he could have saved his tears for later. That aside, it was well written with no errors. Great job!
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