Broken

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'That all I heard. That all I feel. That all I see. That all, That everything. Everything is chaos.' (chapter 1 )

'(FLASHBACK)
A ball. I'm hugging myself. I'm holding myself so thight like a ball.

HIT HIT HIT           LAUGH LAUGH LAUGHING 

They laughing at me. I scream "HELP"
For what.......no one hear  me or maybe they did....but.....they dont care.
WATER.  I feel water rolling down my cheeks. TEARS,  i'm      crying.
"Weak" I heard someone say. I'm use to it. I heard it so much.


Every time I cry they call me weak. And the worst part is that I believe them.
 

I try to get up but ............. Falling 
 

I'm falling.


(FLASHBACK ENDS)
 



 



 

 

Foreword

So first I like to start of with the way I write.... ^~^

The way  I write is very different from others writer....so it might be harder to read or easier for you.


Second.......the discription.
 

I could not come up with a discription for this fanfic so, I just wrote a preview of what you'll be reading the next two chapters. U_U

 

 

Third....making my life harderXD

 

I wrote alot of chapters for this fanfic on paper now I'am going to post it here.

I have lots of more things to say but, I forgot so yeah. XD 


 

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jjongluvbummie
#1
Chapter 6: uh it's more and more interesting with every chp and something must really bad happened to key for him to be being this depresse poor boy.now that other four mention here its going to be more good.

can't wait to know more��
SteampunkInformants #2
Chapter 5: The secret messages make this story 10 times more interesting.
nedy90
#3
Chapter 4: What they did to me is unforgetable.. I cant wait to infold all this mistery
magicbananas #4
Chapter 4: This is cool, kinda like intense ^u^
I want more!! Haha
jjongluvbummie
#5
Chapter 1: It's short but good.like your writing style and waiting for more.for your next fic I will say jongkey and jongkey.☺
magicbananas #6
Can't wait!!! ^~^