When Cold Water Turns to Ice [Incomplete/Unfinished]

Description

A child from a rich family who was titled as the 'disgrace of the family' decided to leave when she was very young. She grew with her brother-who was adopted by her family but still treated the same as the child-alone in seperate dorms(mansions). They lived with their friends, all during their school years, until they got their jobs-being a kpop idol. Every one of them became an idol, except one friend who decided to leave many years ago, during their highschool years. Now, that one friend-who was very close to dating the child-comes to one of her fansigns and stays until the very end to reveal himself. And that's where the story begins.

Foreword

Disclaimer: This is mainly B.A.P focused. Just lettin you know. 'Cold Love' kinda had the groups evened out but this time it's mainly Daehyun and Yoojin.

Um terrible description... I didn't know waht to put. It's sequel of 'Cold Love' which is why I made my title "Cold things stay cold-with a few changes' if you have a better idea for the title you're welcome to suggest it cus I think I'm just gonna kinda bull this story like how i did to like half of "Cold Love". I wonder if any of you will actually read it. Anyway, if you're wondering what Cold Love is-you really shouldn't-here's the link:

C old Love

just click on that and it should um. yeah. but really, don't read the story... it's terrible. The only chapter you need to read to understand the background of this sequel is this chapter:

Their Past Part 1

Their Past Part 2

Destiny

I actually kinda like the last chapter... compared to the rest of the story. It has a nice cliff hanger. Anyway, don't really bother reading the other chapters but if you are just so curious go ahead no one's stopping you-ok I kinda am but it's for your own mental health. Well, I have nothing more to say, except that I can relate a lot to Jin's personality-and I DO have an older sister and younger sister but my parents don't despise me but my little sister can get annoying. I don't have an adopted brother.

Thanks bro.

-Night

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jmayo81 #1 May 10, 2016 01:16:02

Chapter 26: Ok, thanks for the heads up! Understand, it makes it easier when you enjoy writing the story. Either way, thanks for the chapters you have written!

jmayo81 #2 Apr 12, 2016 00:51:53

Chapter 1: I just read the 3 chapters suggested from the previous story, so this would make more sense. I like the premise of the story, I hope this doesn't come off mean, and if you've changed the format in the chapters to come, please ignore this. But I do think it would be more helpful if it was more clear who is talking, especially in dialogues where more than 1 person is having a convo. Other than that, Nice Job ^_^

jmayo81 #3 Apr 5, 2016 01:42:46

Thank you for updating! I just realized that I subscribed, so as to remind myself to read later & forgot! I can't wait to start reading ^_^ of course I'll read the recommended chapters from cold love 1st, thanks for referencing the ones that pertain to the story! Looking forward to beginning story!

glitter123 #4 Mar 29, 2015 10:12:45

Chapter 9: i like it!