Head In the Clouds (One-shot)

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An one-Shot. Hopefully all these practices will pay off. I hope I'm improving. This is one-shot of OC & Yunho. A sudden visit interrupts Yeon Yi's presentation, and it turns out to be superstar Jung Yunho, but why does he pretend like he knows her when she has no memory of ever meeting him?

Foreword

I hope people will give my one-shot a try. I'm trying the best I can. My internet is ing up so therefore, my posts will probably not make it till tomorrow :( It's a quick writing practice and also to give me an excuse to use this cliche idea. But I hope that I intrigue readers and hopefully you enjoy this one-shot. Critisism is very welcome. I'm only trying to improve, so please give me pointers. Is the one-shot too long? Um... things like that :) This one-shot consist of original character Yeon Yi and Yunho. I hope you guys enjoy! :) Show some love :)

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KpopCandice #1
Annyeonng^~^ I'm a new writer;) Do subscribe my story tooxD
http://www.asianfanfics.com/story/view/339705/when-i-live-with-mr-popular-schoollife
minjixxx #2
this was awesome :D so creative, haha. it's really good <3 omg. loved it ^^
caffemelon #3
It's sad but I like it :)
yepponoona #4
OMG...this is awesome... my heart is racing reading this..
so sad but still very interesting <3
candyforlove #5
this is so sad. She died in the end. Great job on writing the oneshot.
koreankendi #6
Wow. Got goosebumps!<br />
Well done! :)
Asian_Innocence #7
Good job!<br />
I like long one-shots~<br />
gives time for the story to develop more<br />
her death was so bittersweet.<br />
bitter because of her obvious death<br />
but sweet that at least she got her wish before dying.
emiex145 #8
woahhs ... i liked it [:<br />
i dno how to describe it really , lols , so i'll just say awesome work ^^
felita01 #9
so sad, I cried :(
DarkHybridx #10
o.o epic.
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