Falling In Love With Your Twin

Description

Kai and Kyungsoo Do are twins with extremely different personalities. They live in a decent apartment, although practically alone. Their father left them causing their mother to lose control of herself. She leaves for long periods of time forcing Kai and Kyungsoo to grow up without a mother. Kai sees his brother as perfect, and because their family is not wealthy, he fails school so Kyungsoo can go to college. He doesn't know how to show his emotions so he pushes Kyungsoo away, and scolds him constantly, often hurting Kyungsoo's sensitive heart. However once Kyungsoo ends up drunk and confesses his love for Kai, their relationship completely changes- for better and for worse.
One brother acts upon emotions, the other acts upon impulse. How will their differences cause them to clash?

Opposites attract after all.  

 

​Characters:

 

 

Kai

First born

17 years old

5'11"

Rough and wild

Blunt but honest

 

Things he likes

Spicy ramen, going on runs, the rain, cold temperature, kitties

Things he dislikes:

Spiders, beans and onions, allergic to potatoes, doesn't eat chicken

 

Kyungsoo

Second born

17 years old

5'8"

Sweet and sensitive

Shy but caring

 

Things he likes

Peaches, spicy ramen, melon, and ice cream

Thing he dislikes:

Any type of bug, the dark, scary movies, onions and beans, allergic to chicken, doesn't eat potatoes

 

Secondary characters

 

Dr. Oh Sehun

 

Byun Baekhyun

Park Chanyeol

 

Principal Lee

 
 
 

Foreword

Excerpt from the chapter: Lies Will Only Get Worse;
 
"Don't call me Hyung if you don't think of me that way!"
"Hyung! It's not like that!" Kyungsoo stood up and faced me. 
"Then tell me why you said it!"
"I was drunk!"
"You know what you were saying."
"Of course I didn't!"
"You even told me not to tell myself! Kyungsoo tell me if you do or not!" 
"I don't! And why are you all beat up?"
"Liar! And I fell."
"I-I have a boyfriend!" 
"Huh? You do not! Kyung stop lying!"
"You're the liar! You got in a fight again didn't you?! And I-I have a boyfriend!"
"Do you admit you're gay?"
"EH?! That's not what I s-"
"You just said you have a boyfriend." He was obviously lying, he's always been bad at lying. 
"Y-yes."
 

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kellyb2st
#1
Chapter 14: Loved the story. Great work
Eatmychocolatewings #2
Chapter 14: Chapter 14: This is beautiful. Chapters 11 and 12 had me in tears. I love the way you've portrayed their relationship and the way Kai takes care of Kyungsoo in his own way despite it not always being the best choice. I also love how you made me hate Kyungsoo’s reluctance to believe that his brother brought those chocolates and flowers and Kai's unbearable obliviousness even though I can understand their reasons why.
Another thing I am grateful for and something not often seen, is the main focus isn't the but a rough relationship riddled with misunderstandings and miscommunication.
It's only 14 chapters long but it's beautifully written and really held my interest. This is probably never going to be seen but I'll thank you nonetheless for a great read!
Miley94
#3
Chapter 7: OMG. I laughed so hard at the end of this chapter. Our unlucky Kyungsoo being kidnapped by our caring Sehunnie totally ! That was hilarious.
noemimart #4
Very nice story, you present it so well
FANTASTIC_VIP
#5
Chapter 15: My Face Hurts From Smiling!!! I Loved This Story!!
FANTASTIC_VIP
#6
Chapter 8: Ok, this is probably wrong but when i read 'kyungsoo dont touch my cat' i busted out laughing
FANTASTIC_VIP
#7
Chapter 6: Now that i think about it HunSoo wouldnt be bad
FANTASTIC_VIP
#8
'warning:there will be language' ahh i love simple warnings like that