Chapter 2: Awww...They are so cute together :)

Chapter 2: Wonderful story

Chapter 2: Aww this was adorable ^_^
Poor jimin but thankfully he has kookie.

Chapter 2: this is a cute mini sequel
lol can't you just do more and more mini sequels until it becomes like a chaptered fanfic lol
i'm joking

this was really nice so thankyou ^^

Chapter 1: Contradictions... I love and I hate this.. No hate is too strong because I really love this, I just feel like this is something you write for a plot or something but then this is a one shot, it felt rushed but not really like I think I love this do much that jikook has been so cute that I want more. Don't get upset because I love this I just wish it wasn't a one shot I guess more if a story would've been absolutely more amazing but all in all this was amazing.
Fighting

Chapter 1: eventhough its short and sudden it feels calm and love.~

Chapter 1: omg this is so cute btw i love your description

Chapter 1: NAAAAAAAAAW :D