Sacred

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This is for the weird minority Bestfriends who ship Youngkwang, just like me. 

I know vampire stories are oh-so-yesterday, but I still want to give it a try.

 

 

 

*Note:

English is not my native language so I apologize if my grammar mistakes annoy you. I do try my best to minimize them.

Please comment and help me improve on my work :)

Thank you for your support!

Foreword

Pant.

Pant. 

Pant.

Kwangmin ran.

His heart filled with pure terror.

 

Another door.

Another turn.

Darkness was surrounding him.

His legs burned in exhaustion.

Why am I running?

 

Faster.

Faster.

He had no time to look back.

He could already felt the monster’s footsteps approaching from behind.

 

NO!!

He screamed.

The pain was unbearable.

His heart was ripped out.

He was dead. The monster had torn him apart.

 

He couldn’t remember how it looked like.

It was too dark to make out a face.

Still, the memory of its yellow iries burnt into his soul, leaving a permanent scar.

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Caar31 #1
Chapter 20: Please 😭 comeback... I Really love this story 😭
Kawaiidesuka #2
Chapter 20: Hoping for an update :( Please Update Author-nim~
BFYourPOV
#3
Chapter 18: And btw I saw that YoungKwang moment on their live show....how kwangmin acted all shy like a fangirl when he was being kissed by or kissed youngmin sooooo kyoooooteee
BFYourPOV
#4
Chapter 19: I forgive you author nim! Don't worry, will still anticipate your great work!
cestmavie
#5
This is honestly killing me. I was thinking about this my last test and couldn't focus!!!
I almost got in trouble. Please just tell me you aren't abandoning it. It's too good to be real. Seriously.
cestmavie
#6
Well deserved upvote. Your story should have more!!!
Expecting your updates:3
cestmavie
#7
Chapter 18: Just to tell you that I didn't want to read this and thought I wouldn't like it, but surprise surprise...
I LOVED IT. THIS IS MY BEW RELIGION. AWE. SOME.
fishykevinwoo
#8
Chapter 18: Hmmmmmm... I'll give my most honest opinion here...
I find the lack of full-stops a bit too distracting.
There was also a lack of built-up tension, maybe a cut scene of the werewolves edging into the castle or possible trouble for Hyunseong's group would have flesh the part out a little more, since it feels like you're just rushing to let YoungKwang meet.
It was a good time for Jeongmin to lag behind and Hyunseong conflict between Kwangmin and Jeongmin too, but everything was too smooth-sailing?
Maybe I'm too angsty HAHA, while I do this a lot too, the fact that almost everything is dialogue and spelt out exactly felt a bit too straightforward. Just as Onew has his reservations about Hyunseong, there should be some explicit refusal, this could have flesh out a little longer?
But perhaps you have a better plan with that werewolf outside the cabin so I'll just wait and see! Fighting~