The first time we met

Description

Sooooo.... This is my first fanfic!!!! Please be nice to me .... And sorry for the grammar!!! R&R!!!!

Foreword

"oh and song ji hyo-shi ??" he called.

"Ne,kim jong kook-shi?"i said.

" you can call me oppa" he said.

"arasso.. Oppa... And you can call me by name"i said while smilling

" Arasso.. Ji hyo-ah"he said while smiling.

 

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Song ji hyo flash back about the first time she met kim jong kook

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Mithani
#1
Update soon
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Mithani
#2
Chapter 1: update soon
boboy100 #3
Chapter 1: yah! interesting in a good way!!! write more..thank you
iimkiwi #4
Chapter 1: interesting start :) can't wait to see the next chapter :)
anw, maybe you could write the dialogue in a different manner instead of putting everything in one paragraph. It'll be easier to catch what they're saying and not miss a line or reply :)
arielc #5
Chapter 1: nice authormin, can't wait for the next one. Hwaiting :)
RunningManFans
#6
I know it's bad... But please be nice to me!!! :)