Intoxicated Paradise

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Prologue: Intoxication

                Rhythmic heartbeats fill her ears. Then gradually, the heartbeats quicken uncontrollably. Her breathing morphs into erratic pants. She blinks slowly. The cup in front of her is a blur of brown. She blinks again. With impaired eyesight, her trembling hand reaches for the glass vial. With the cold sensation tingling against the touch of her hand, the cup falls out of her grasp.

                The shatter of the glass sends a jolt of electricity through her body.

                She blinks languidly at the reflection laughing at her.

                If this is paradise, then what is hell?  

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A Piece of Me: Paradise

            I’m not exactly sure where my story begins. Heck, I’m not even sure who I’m writing this to. There are words I want to say, but I can’t. I’m afraid of being judged. I’m afraid of being shunned away. I’m afraid of being lonely. There are far too many times when my heart has been broken – I’ve given hope in everyone.

            Does my story begin when I’m abandoned, feeling as if someone repeatedly stabbed me until I bled my soul out?

            Or perhaps, when I’m dancing foolishly at the palm of Death?

            Or even, when I’m seconds away from hell and a guardian angel sent from above saved my life?

            He promised me paradise. And when he couldn’t give it to me, he left, just like everybody else.

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[Author's note: 14/10/23] It's time for my angst skills to shine through again! I'm really looking forward to writing this story and I hope you'll enjoy it as much as I will!

[Author's note: 14/10/30] Credits to -YatLuvG for the beautiful poster! You can find her at Voice Connection Graphic Shop!

springrain
14.11.06. Chapter one is still in the works. I'm having a hard time figuring out the details of each character! Please anticipate!

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LayHealingUnicorn
#1
Chapter 7: woah! *clap, clap* the ending is really clever and the story was nice :)
tamiyoung
#2
wow you got me at the end by putting kyungsoo as one of yixing's patient! so in love with this fic
kelliejoan
#3
Chapter 7: i was so surprise that kyungsoo was the patient orz but then, how? how can the past haunt him back when he seems to be perfectly fine before, he even ran a business. 7 years, and and-- orz

anyways, i love it and it's well written, i thought i read a novel written by one of the famous author lol. hm
asdfghjklovek #4
Chapter 7: I'm in love with this
Yizzydipzy #5
Chapter 7: Really liked this story. Keep up the good work! Have a great day :)
hellroses
#6
Nice i enjoyed this
jinki89
#7
Chapter 7: I.... Do not get it..... Like, how can kyungsoo become the patient? God..
chonanay
#8
Chapter 7: For me too. Especially when you described Jongin's past.
exovip1993
#9
Chapter 7: Maybe Kyungsoo can return to his original profession as well.
exovip1993
#10
Chapter 6: Is Jongin still alive? Poor Hye Mi.