A SECRET

Description

This is a simple story,

i thought everyone has been ever in main caracter position.

it's tell about a girl who love her bestfriend, and don't have any brave to be honest with her feelings.

Foreword

 

=Secret=

an unspoken word


a feelings that indescribable


there's only mind and heart space


which complete each other


with full of hope


he will understand someday


or not at all

[overlovexo]

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Chanyeol - 22 years old

Me - 22 years old

Kyungsoo - 21 years old

Sehun - 20 years old

Luhan - 24 years old

We are a bestfriend because our house are near each other,

we have a habit to gather in Chanyeol's house and talk many things what happen in our day,

among five of us, the one who closest with Chanyeol is me because we are in the same age,

everything is oke until i found myself in love with Chanyeol silently...

and try to keep this

as

a secret.

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adhweet #1
Chapter 1: Firstly, congratulations on your first ever fan fiction in AFF haha
Secondly I like the story. It's angsty
Overall this is good, although you do need to fix the grammar. And lastly, make sure you describe more about the situation, the character's feeling and emotion, the expressions etc so we as readers get the picture of the whole situation.
Try reading more of fan fictions here, there are tons of good ff here in AFF.
Good luck on your next title ^^
Dyodoreu95 #2
Chapter 1: Whooooooooooooa~~~! Congratulation for your first fanfic ever! //the published one// you have no idea i have always skipped a story if it has a boring foreword but since you are my friend i skipped it to the main story and guess whaaat??? Your fanfic stole my attention!!! Great plot! Nice opening! Omg! I love it! I read it till the end! I totally imagining it! Me sitting in the circle and having a bitter expression for my crush❤️ Keep writing, Manda! You are talented! (⌒♡⌒)
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