Ghost in the Orphanage (one-shot version)

Description

I've decided to write a short version of the story, as it seems easier. And I have to say sorry that I abandoned the long version for so long, it's because:

1. I lost the last half of my story a long time ago, though I still remember how it goes and how it ends (especially the end).

2. After reading it through again, I find it lame, and I want to make it sound better and more mature.

So somehow I managed to write a short version, decided to post it soon. The long version, it was Jaemin who is the lead role. In this version it will be Yunjae instead, but they weren't be a couple in the story. And it will only be these three characters appearing. (Sorry)

I promise you that it will be post this month as Halloween is coming up, because this story (the long version) was supposed to be something to do with Halloween.

Hope you'll enjoy this version. 

Foreword

At midnight, a knock was heard in one of orphanage room. But who would expect once the door was opened by a boy orphan, a tragic happens to him, and no one knows how his death occurred.

Ten years later, a another boy from the same orphanage name Yunho, always wonder why is there one particular room has been locked up and was never used. He asked some older orphans, they said they heard that the was locked for ten years already and none of the staff will let anyone in there, even if they are new comers.

One night, he hears someone crying, an echo cry from outside of his room. Once outside, he realised the cry is from the room that is locked a long time. Will Yunho be able to find out who is inside even the door is locked? And who is it that is crying so sadly?

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bluelegacy
#1
Chapter 2: I love it so much.. It was a bit bland. The story was predictable, but over all it was good.. Please keep writing more (♡˙︶˙♡)