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Hello and welcome (back) to Heart, Mind & Seoul, a review shop that was established back in the October of 2014. After a long break, I have decided to open up the shop again, and hopefully I will not disappoint you this time. The shop has been through a lot in the past few years but it's a pleasure to be able to continue serving its purpose. I will try my absolute best to bring you all the highest quality of reviews, and I believe with my experience as a reviewer, I can give the most honest and truthful review to you. Any suggestions and constructive criticism are very much welcomed for future improvements.

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owner/reviewer name: mandy

username: saki1017

experience: 4 years

biases: I'll review all idols but these are my favourites: kris, leo, hongbin, jimin, yongguk, zelo, daniel

genres: I'll review all genres, including mature contents, as long as they do not involve the following: , yuri, mpreg, gender-bender

requestsAt the moment, the batch size is five requests as I'm working alone, so please expect a lengthy waiting time. Please also note that I will only be reviewing stories with a maximum of 5 chapters due to my other schedules. When I get back into the flow of things, I may increase the chapters reviewed and the batch size. Thank you for understanding!

<01 KangminBread || Matching Fragrance || accepted
02 queen07 || Impromptu Discoveries || accepted
03 sooyoung2345 || Time and Tide || accepted
04 chariseuma || A Fingertip Away || accepted
05 LUVkookietae || Tainted || accepted

 

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Foreword

ø all previous reviews have been moved to the archive!

Saki1017
hi guys, sorry for the slow progress, but work has gotten really heavy for me lately, but i'll do my best to get these reviews done! sorry for the wait and thank you for your patience!

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stellarstarlight
#1
Chapter 24: I've always been curious about review shops. I could never do it myself. If you don't mind my asking, how did you come up with your rubric?
jaxial
#2
Requested!
chariseuma
#3
hello! i requested for a review. let me know if u receive it xo
contaminated
#4
Chapter 30: Title: Actually, the title is the whole reason I started the story! XD I wanted to write something with that title and voila, TFA was born.

Description: I have moved that spoiling sentence from the foreword now. :3 as for the M rating, I have plans to possibly expand this story and there will be more gore-y explicit-y violent-y stuff (I don't know how to be articulate, don't hit me).

Appearance: yasss those graphics. I love JiaAera's work. ;u;

Characterization: Yes the story is terribly short and I may have not shown much of the characters ene but if all goes well, I may expand this tragic mess into something further. Ah yes, poor Soo. I feel bad for him ;_;

Plot: asdfghjkl yes it's almost a drabble, I can't write long oneshots to save my life (except one that is spiraling out of control help). Nope, I don't think it's unique, just something I personally wanted to write (and I wanted to up my fantasy story count). Well I'm going to try, but no promises.

Grammar, spelling & Punctuation: this is a first TwT I'm glad you didn't find mistakes! :D

Writing Style: Phew :D

Readers' Response: I have finished replying to those comments now (I am easily sidetracked) :D yes, there is a reason I have put all of my stories on subs only, that reason being plagiarizing little vermin scurrying around me all the furicking time. :)

Thank you for reviewing and I have credited! <33333
Suhyo07
#5
Chapter 28: Hello, I'm so sorry I didn't pick up earlier but I had too much going on > <
Anyways, first of all, thank you for your hard work! The title actually means 'the balance and the way', for reasons which will reveal themselves in the story later ^^ and thanks for the reminder about the translation! I'll keep it in mind~
I'm really glad about the characterisation! To be honest, I was a bit worried over him since there might be repetitive emotions (you know, the descriptions about him being depressed and emotionally relying on his deceased lover)
And about the plot - yes, I will explain more as the story progresses; I'm in the planning stages of the story as well, so the whole story isn't finished yet, but I have a vague idea about the whole plot which I'm currently working on. And yes, the plot (for now, at least) is Hyunwook being upset over his lover's death ^^
Thank you for the high marks for flow, grammar and writing style! I've had reviewers tell me my writing style being too confusing as I tend to write in really long sentences, but there seems to be not much of a problem in this story :)
About the readers' responses - unfortunately it's rather hard to gain readers especially since this is an oc story with a male oc and not much of a romance plot (at least, not really portrayed clearly). Plus, a few of my friends here have been plagiarised so I'm a bit hesitant on changing it to available to everyone
Thank you overall! I really appreciate your comments ^^ I'll credit once I get home and sorry for picking up really late again > <
sooyoung2345
#6
Hello, I've requested! :-)