Unimpeachable Fugitive

Description


"HAVE YOU EVER TRIED LIVING IN A FAMILY WHO ARE FUGITIVES FROM JUSTICE?"



18-year-old Jageun was a simple and innocent, runaway girl.
Her parents robbed banks for a living and whenever they succeeded,
they would always escape from town to town.
Jageun was used to lying for her real identity that she didn't even remember her real name.
She couldn't make any friends because she didn't attend schools like any other kids.
On the other hand, Lu Han was a charming young boy whom Jageun happened to meet in a park.
What would happen if he found out about Jageun's true self?


 


`vocabulary
-unimpeachable:
 not able to be doubted, questioned, or criticized; entirely trustworthy.
-fugitive:
a person who has escaped from a place or is in hiding, especially to avoid arrest or persecution.

Foreword

Hello there. This is my first time writing a one-shot so hope you guys like it.
Some of the storyline originally wasn't mine but it belonged to my friend,
best friend.
You see, on our English final paper, there's a section which is a
continuous writing where you need to select one out of five to write a
composition.
My friend chose a topic that ends with
"...... We said goodbye and promised to keep in touch."

Her teacher gave her a rather displeasing mark which was only 32/50 so she wasn't happy with it.
But when I read her story, it was rather
interesting eventhough I can see some grammars and unrealistic scene.
So, after asking her permission, she allowed me to take three points from her story and rewrite a new one
.

I changed the character names and replaced the guy's name with
Lu Han.
Hope you guys like it :D

 

Dedicated to my best friend, Pavitra, who always be there for me for the past 3 years and 10 months.
SHE HAD JUST OPENED A NEW ACCOUNT: SHIRE98. GO MAKE FRIENDS WITH HER!


`story entry for a freedom writing contest.
`poster from cloudy dream poster shop.



"It isn't cliche but not a newly fresh written idea either. But I simply like it!
So, don't worry~ It's real good because I can hardly find stories like yours! (Or is it me just me...?)"

-BlueHeartStarlight, Pandromeda's Official Review Thread.

"I actually like your story title. It's a bit sophisticated, but I loved the most was the connection it had with the story's ending.
A good title is paramount to grabbing people's attention and, most importantly, making them remember it." 

-yeolwho05, Mental Breakdown Reviews.


"This fanfic though. I like everything excluding that little too fast story flow! But overall, this is a pretty solid one-shot."
-Altina, Melted Writing Cafe.

"
Right from the start, I expected them to be living out in a tent or something mobile.
I did not  expect them to be so normal and casual, but scary and serious people."

-LAVI1903, BLK's Review Shop.
 


Author's other stories

MY BROTHER'S BESTFRIEND | UNIMPEACHABLE FUGITIVE | UNIMPEACHABLE FUGITIVE: REBIRTH | HE HEARD IT |
BECAUSE, IT'S LOVE | HER ENTHUSIASM | HEAVEN'S BRIDE | MOONHAVENS GS | RICH LITTLE HUSBAND

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BangMind
#1
Chapter 1: I was confused when Luhan greeted her with her real name though. That small typo ^^
Sojeann
#2
Chapter 1: Hi I like it and it was great story nice one in revising it you really make a good job right there. Cedits also to yoir best friend for a nice idea. Keep it up. Oh yeah thankd for making a sequel because it makes me curious what will happen after they part ways it was really cliff hang there and I was really looking forward to know there end story.
almighty_bee #3
Chapter 1: Thanks for th PM, I like the story. But I think you make alittle typo.
You should make the sequel, I like happy ending story. Although it is happy ending , but it will be nice if she can be with Luhan. Hehehe
Shire98 #4
Chapter 1: The best story ever...the best one so far... :3 ...I love the ending ^^! #speechless
girlgamer129 #5
Hey, ur right the story didnt regret me at all. It was a great story. I LOVE it. Thank you for telling me <3. Brofist ( this is just something I do in my author note. Im just a pewdie addict (bro) )
girlgamer129 #6
Hey, your right the story didn't reget me. It was a great story. I LOVE it. Thanks for telling me.<3 and Brofist (the brofist thing is normal I always use in my author note. Im pewdie addict)
mikasa07 #7
I TOTALLY LOVE IT ~ <3
SEQUEL PLEASEE!! ~
But of course, i want the sequel to have a happy ending :3
Mysterious_Lady
#8
Chapter 1: I love it <3
valeriemillenia #9
Chapter 1: It's really interesting and great definitely (:
And I think the teacher should give 50/50 for your friend (;
Keep on writing !!! :D