Newton's Apple

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Description

He's a popular rockstar...

She's just a little girl...

He's just patiently waiting...

She doesn't notice...

 

"I won’t hide from you
I know that I’ll be drawn right back to you
Like Newton’s apple hit the ground
my gravity always lean towards you

I’ll be there for you
no matter what it takes. I’ll get to you
when you are breaking in denial
I will be the one to hold you

and I will burn for you
each and every part of me belongs to you
when you’re in your darkest hour
I’ll put them all on fire and guide you

 

After all these years you are
Still the love of my life
yes, you are...

 

 


You are"

 

 

Foreword

Copyright 2014. Newton's Apple by butterscotchcream.

Characters written here are not held possession by the author except for the original character (but the original character's mascot, Ha Yeon Soo, is also not is possession by the author).

Written solely for the Solstice Writing Contest and also for the enjoyment and entertainment of the Asianfanfic community.

Prompts used:

25. Music speaks the words we are afraid to say.

28. One by one I'll memorize the scars across your heart, one by one I'll erase them from your memories until I am the only one who still remembers.

30. There's a difference between who we love, who we settle with and who we're meant for.

36. I was the moon of your life. You were the sun and my stars. But just like the sun and the moon, we were never meant to share the same sky.

43. Gravity

 

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yuu_sama #1
Chapter 4: Oh God, this chapter is a kick for me! <3
Finally Sunhee opens her eyes to the reality!
And I'm happy that Kyungsoo is like a lover, brother and a father at the same time here! Again, he's listening to all what troubled her, and uggh... I can't help my feeling that Kyungsoo might be hurt and happy inside. This is how great love can influence us!
I hope Sunhee can really give up on Jaejoong.
And of course, I hope she can see Kyungsoo more than just a best friend...
I'm satisfied, author-nim. Thank you for working hard for your readers! :)
yuu_sama #2
Chapter 3: In my opinion, Sunhee is the luckiest girl amongst all of those who attended the showcase. It's just too bad that she didn't know about it and cried herself to sleep, instead. I won't scold Sunhee this time, because she got the right reason to break down. If I were in her position, I think I would cry a river too for losing the ticket! T_T Seeing someone you usually only see on TV in the reality is a very rare chance, and blowing up that very rare chance with a stupid mistake must be really painful. I understand you, Sunhee.

However, still, Sunhee is the luckiest girl! ^^ She's now the Cinderella whom the prince is looking for! Awww, I wish I could jump into your story and tell her that she needed to cry no more! Hahahaha XD It's not that I'm a Kyungsoo-biased fan, but I still want Sunhee to be with Kyungsoo. Yeah, Jaejoong might have more things, from look to money, but Kyungsoo... ah, I can't really say it. He's just waiting out there, but what is he waiting for? Why doesn't he tell her the truth about what he feels?! Oh, but I'm happy you're not listening to me, your reader, because we need these problems to make the story more exciting~! ^^ Hahaha... Good job once again, author-nim!
yuu_sama #3
Chapter 2: Dear, author, how are you? I think I'm going to flood your comment timeline again with my comments. I hope it won't bother you, author-nim, or if you feel so, then please tell me, hehehe~ <3
You know what, I never know this story about Daedalus and Icarus, but I'm surprised that you insert this kind of knowledge into your story, which I think is very good! Now I've learned their story, and yes, it did have a very bad ending. Maybe you don't know, but what Kyungsoo said in this fiction is impacting on me and you had implicitly taught me that sometimes what we really want can turn out to be something that put us in danger. Due to our stubbornness, we can't see the danger that is waiting for us~ and like a fool, we chase what we want until we hurt ourselves! ^^

Author-nim, I wonder if you like to read many literature books. I'm always interested in this kind of story, like Daedalus and Icarus, story that has lessons for the readers. And once again, thank you so much for letting me know about their story!

I love the way you develop the characters, and believe it or not... I really want to give Sunhee a slap on her face! I want to shake her so badly, hahahaha XD She keeps fantasizing about Jaejoong, and damn (sorry for my rude word), why can't she take a look on Kyungsoo, even for just a while? I know she just considers him as a best friend, but somehow it hurts me... and Kyungsoo is so patient dealing with her stupidity. Oh God... I hope Sunhee has her eyes opened someday and see that Kyungsoo is the only one who always stays by her side for all this time!
rumourhasit12
#4
Chapter 2: Omg yay it's me~ :))) hmmm what did Kyungsoo mean? :)))
rumourhasit12
#5
Chapter 1: Awww it's not the one I sent you lolss
yuu_sama #6
Chapter 1: This opening chapter should have raised my "sad" mood, but because of Kyungsoo... how much he took care of Sunhee... how sincere his feelings were towards her... I feel touched by the "fluff" moments instead~ which is very good! ^-^ Kyungsoo is too kind, I think, almost like in an angel. He's always there for her. Unfortunately, Sunhee was too blinded by Jaejong that she couldn't see the one closest to her who loved her with heart and soul. Arh, by concluding this, I feel sad again...
I want to scold Kyungsoo~ why he didnt just tell her about his feeling inside, but somehow I can understand his position. More or less, I've been like him before so I can connect myself with your story, author-nim... this hurts me so much!! >_< Arrgh... but I love this!
One thing that I dont like is only Physics!!! Hahaha! I hated it the most! ^^ I never understand Physics, I just dont know why... I think I am stupid, hahaha. But dont worry, I'll bear Physics only for this fanfic, author-nim.
Oh, one more thing...
I noticed this.

" ...she’ll not realize the value of small things that can make you happy."

Ummm, I think there's a typo (?). Maybe "...small things that can make her happy" instead? Hehehe, I dont know. Do correct me if I'm wrong.

Overall, I can't wait to read your next chapter, author-nim! This is very good! <3 Especially, because I want to know what Kyungsoo will do next. Will he wake Sunhee up from her silly dream being with Jaejoong? Or... perhaps... there will be another surprise for me? Woaaah~ I'm excited! I wish I could read your mind, hehehe~ ^^