Someone Better

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Description

“When he holds my hands, I feel safe. Whenever he kisses me, I simply feel complete. When he touches me, I forget all of my problems. Whenever he makes love to me, I enter a world where only the two of us exists.”

 

When he touches her, she feels disgusted of herself. He treats her as if she’s an object with no feelings at all. She comes home with a lot of marks, a reminder of how weak she is for giving him what he wants. Sure she feels great while they were doing it, but when it ends, she goes home feeling like trash, dirty. But when she goes home, someone would always open his arms and comfort her and make her forget all of what happened. Someone who would be willing to shower her with love, even though it’s forbidden, was there just to comfort her.

 

“There is a difference between physical love and mental love. Many people can separate them.  I need to,” – Luhan in Lured by meihuas.

Foreword

Characters:

Kim Kyungmi

  • 20 years old
  • Loves whole-heartedly and leaves nothing for herself
  • Tends to be destructive when depressed
  • Chanyeol’s old neighbour

Park Chanyeol

  • 20 years old
  •  in a relationship with a famous model
  • Very caring, loved Kyungmi since junior high
  • Moved from Canada

Lu Han

  • 21 years old
  • Protective over Kyungmi
  • Sehun’s girlfriend

Oh Sehun

  • 21 years old
  • Luhan’s boyfriend
  • Quiet but caring
  • Actions first before words

Kim Taehyung aka V

  • 20 years old
  • Love interest of Han Joohee
  • Very sweet but kind of

Jeon Jungkook

  • 20 years old
  • Taehyung’s best friend
  • Cute and lovable but innocent

Han Joohee

  • 21 years old
  • Jungkook’s cousin

 

A/N:

 

If I ever own any of the real characters then there’s no need in writing this story. Therefore, I do not own any of EXO or BTS. The only thing I credit for is the original characters and the story.

 

Yes I made Luhan a girl in this story. I want Luhan and Sehun have a normal relationship so I made Luhan the girl. The third part of my description if from a fan fiction here in AFF titled “Lured” written by meihuas or mina @luhanpls in twitter and ask.fm, starring Sehun and an original character named Nara.

 

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ElleAnn #1
Chapter 14: Good job authornim!!!This story is really DAEBAK!!!I really love it.
jessi828 #2
Chapter 14: wow!!!! good one
KeziahK
#3
Chapter 14: EXTREMELY BRILLIANT TOTALLY AMAZING... IM SPEECHLESS!
KeziahK
#4
Chapter 1: THIS IS THE BEST. There are no words in my vocabulary to describe how great this chapter is. ^^
mycutiebarista
#5
Chapter 7: eto na, nabasa ko na. haha.
kainis na joohee yan.. aish.

lalabas pa ba gf ni channie??
yasmin_yeol #6
Chapter 6: Please update soon
mycutiebarista
#7
Chapter 6: naulit. xD
ifollow kita sa IG pag nagbukas ako. xD

at yung story,.waaah. :'( taehyung-ah, pabo yah. >__<
Mianhe, kainis eh. aish. dapt tigil na nya yun. >__<


can I be one??hehe. pero syempre, kaw pa din. kung sino pagkakatiwalaan mo. ;)
mycutiebarista
#8
Chapter 5: magtagalog ako ah. xD

Bat kasi ganun??xD muntik na ko maiyak dun sa kwento nya.
pareho tuloy silang may heartbreak ni Chanyeol. >__<

Kinilig naman ako sa ginawa ni Chanyeol.xDD
more...xD

at ang masasabi ko kay Kyungmi ay,
mahal nya si channie, noon plang pero d nya lang pansin.xD <-- feel ko lang.xD

bat pa sya sumusunod kay taehyung??takot sa punishment??xD abang-abang ng nxt update. :3

<3 <3 <3
sayang d pa ko pde mag-upvote.>__<