Happy Anniversary (Revise version)

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Description

 

 

Hello! Hello! It is I, justkayepop here dedicating to you a fanfic to one of my favorite supergeneration couples *drum roll please* "SEOKYU" or the "Maknae Couple." To be honest I wrote this story in my other account "supergeneration_12" if you passed by or atleast read this story from there then you know what happens :3

 

I actually have no reason to place this here, but maybe it's because I want to showcase to you my talent in writing from long ago *please ignore what i just previously said >.<* This story was written in the year 2011, how fast time flies doesn't it? Anyway enjoy~ :3

 

oh yeah, the main image/ cover of this story was made by me, sorry if it's horrible >.<

Foreword

 

Seohyun and Kyuhyun's 2nd year anniversary is coming up and Seohyun is very excited, but Kyuhyun seems to have forgotten about their anniversary; will their special day be ruined??? Let's find out....^^

 

justKayepop
comments are truly appreciated :)

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Bookworm01
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Chapter 1: This story is cute! Thumbs up! The timing you have is also impeccable because I was recently listening to their, Seohyun and Kyuhyun, rendition of Way Back Into Love by Hugh Grant in a concert. I think I'm the only one who thinks of this. I also noticed that you used the "kiss" they had during a play. Hehe... When I saw that scene (actually, that was the only scene I watched), I was squealing at Kyuhyun's cuteness about it.
I saw your other stories because I just checked them out (some of them) a few minutes ago. I think that you didn't make a lot of mistakes when it comes to grammar and spelling but I understand that it may have been because of personal reasons.
Your style of writing is exactly what I see in scripts. In scripts, the writers usually just state who would say what and how the actors would say a particular line. They also state the setting so I think your stories are like that. I think you pulled it off quite well.

I'm sorry for criticizing your work. I didn't really mean to but I was trying to comment on the story itself, which is cute, by the way.

P.S.
Do you know how to speak Tagalog? Hehe... I was just curious since I saw on your profile that you were a Filipino. ^_^ You don't have to answer if you're uncomfortable with the question. I was just curious so I asked.