My Heart

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Excerpt from the Most Recent Oneshot:

They reached Sandeul's room first, and when he moved to step inside, Baro caught his shoulder. Before he could protest the action, he leaned down the few inches that separated them and pressed a chaste kiss to his lips. When he drew away, he was startled to find tears b in Sandeul's eyes. 

"Go to bed," Sandeul murmured gruffly.

Challenging myself to write 25 Oneshots, featuring 25 Bands and using 25 different prompts!
See the other Challenges here, at >> The 25 Challenge (contest) <<

BEAUTIFUL Poster made by ❛ EMPTY。a graphic shop

Foreword

I'll be using a bunch of different genres, though angst is probably going to be the biggest one used (hence the name, 'My Heart'). Enjoy my collection!!!

The Prompts...

1. The best place in the world is in the arms of someone who will not only hold you at your best, but will pick you up and hug you tight at your weakest moment.
2. We all have a story to tell, whether we whisper or yell.
3. Stop trying to change someone who doesn't want to change. Stop giving chances to someone who abuses your forgiveness. Stop walking back to the place where your heart ran from. Stop trusting their words, and ignoring their actions. Stop giving your all to a person who gives you nothing. Stop fighting for a relationship when you're standing in the ring alone. Stop breaking your own heart.
7. There are some people who could hear you speak a thousand words and still not understand you. And there are others who will understand without you even speaking a word.
10. A kind gesture can reach a wound that only compassion can heal.
11. Sometimes people try to expose what's wrong with you because they can't handle everything that's right about you.
12. Until we have seen someone's darkness we don't really know who they are. Until we have forgiven someone's darkness, we don't really know what love is.
14. The flower that blooms in adversity is the most rare and beautiful of all.
15. When you're pushed, killing is as easy as breathing.
16. People build up walls not to keep others out, but to see who cares enough to break them down.
18. Love sometimes comes like a dream and leaves like a nightmare.
20. Sometimes good things fall apart so better things can fall together.
21. Sometimes the strongest among us are the ones who smile through silent pain, cry behind closed doors, and fight battles nobody knows about.
22. One's first love is always perfect until one meets one's second love.
23. She was drowning but nobody saw her struggle.
24. "Lie to me again," she whispered.
"I love you," he said.
25. Monsters are real, and ghosts are real too. They live inside us, and sometimes, they win.

Author's Thoughts
-Tigress-
I have dropped out of the competition BUT I will be continuing to try and do these prompts.
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-Yuan- #1
Chapter 7: oooooh i remeber your one shot collection!
-Yuan- #2
i saw a tiny gd in the poster i had to clicke
Amalya #3
Chapter 8: Bahaha! This was decidedly cute. XD I had no idea what to expect when I saw the update but when I got into it, the whole thing kept getting more delightful. After that intro with the crappy mother anyway. Wench... Good for Hoya though! Especially because it led to such an interesting afternoon and friends after that.

You know me and magical creatures (especially the ones you introduced). hehe I was grinning like an idiot when they introduced themselves too. And Hoya's mental commentary was priceless. Yes, you can think the dragon is y, thank you very much. ;P lol And I really liked that ending too. Such a cute little change of pace from some of your more wrenching tales. ^_^

Great job my dear! <3
Amalya #4
Chapter 7: D'aw! This was adorable! XD And I totally laughed out loud when Minjun's private side waved the white flag of surrender. So cute! haha

You set the stage so well with this one and it felt like a very believable world. His early home life made me cringe and feel all the sadness and then you filled it with life with his grandfather only to dash my heart against the rocks again. Poor thing. Two times over! Woman... -_- lol But it was interesting seeing his thoughts as he wandered through the house. Felt the loss while he observed and looked for food. When he finally decided to head out (the little details with the clothes were nice too), I suspected what was going to happen but I certainly wasn't disappointed when I was right. haha

I could picture everything at the supermarket really well too. Seeing Taecyeon as a cashier made me giggle but the whole scene with him bumping into the new doctor and whatnot made me smile. Especially the sly way he pulled the bulgogi back and mentioned pie. haha Touche sir. It also had a beautiful ending to a beautiful story.

The one thing I will add is that Minjun's name is missing a letter at one point. If there were other typos, I didn't catch them. Well done my dear! lol <3 A beautiful gift for someone indeed!
DGNA_Forever #5
Chapter 6: Damn you...This was such a sad story! It was beautiful and I loved it, and it was wonderful how Baro loved him until the very end. This was one of the rare stories that made me tear up, so thanks for that lol...Great story<3.
DGNA_Forever #6
Chapter 5: I loved how you turned this into a story about a girl and the bond she had with her horse. I could feel their excitement and also their pain while reading this. It was so different from anything else I've read on here, and it was refreshing.
ShimizuTheShizzShota #7
Chapter 5: Okay that was really awesome, I have to say. And the prompt made sense after reading this, Ailee was so sweet with him. And I of course want moooooooooore in this world and plot T^T
Amalya #8
Chapter 4: Well color me intrigued by more of the Nysh people. haha I certainly enjoyed the way you built the back story for them (including the effects of the poison and their home planet) and described why they had markings on their hands (potentially) as well as the color change in Haewon's eyes. Touche indeed. I'll agree with DGNA as well in that you do have a pretty good handle on science fiction since none of it felt forced and all fit quite nicely with what you were crafting in your world. In that line of thought, I think my only concern was just that, did they not have any sort of system in place to test the atmosphere before they landed on the planet? Or was it all just supposed to be faith (not gonna lie, I was really intrigued by the appearance of a prominent religious figure in the sci-fi genre and I'm a er for a Goddess in stories anyways) and blind luck that allowed them the ability to survive the next planet? That part was a bit fuzzy is all.

There were a handful of typos but those bloody things are just irritating menaces to be sure. The plot was otherwise solid and you've got a beautiful staging ground for further adventures. I really liked the tension you built into the scene as well, with the power struggles between the Lieutenants and Donghyun's ability to read all of their thoughts, essentially, as well as the manners of the Commander in turn. He handled himself with great aplomb and I giggled at his outward show of emotion at the end there. They kind of remind me of elves a little bit, with their constant composure. lol

Well done indeed and I certainly look forward to more of the Nysh in the future!
ShimizuTheShizzShota #9
Chapter 4: Hmm that was very interesting. I like the people and the science of their planets and travel. They do make me wonder about their culture (suppressed emotions) and the markings on their hands (how do they get it, and are they born with it?), and all in all, I'd LOVE to see more of this O_O
DGNA_Forever #10
Chapter 4: You really should write more space stories, because you're good at <3. I really liked this story, and the relationship between Donghyun and Haewon was sweet. I loved the end of it, since it offered hope.
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