my destiny (Hiatus)

Description

simple girl from the countryside, she had arich sblings who invited her to stay with them during her accommodation in seoul the problem is that she is in love with their son since she was young but he never notice, he is aplayer and she isn't his style he never notice her, but what will happen when she came to live with them 

Foreword

Hi every one this is my second fic here after "don't play with fire" actually I have a lot of ideas but I have a lot of work to do as well so I will update when I have the time I am doing it just for fun and to improve my English as well, i don't like drama and sad stories as you can see in my first fic _but_ this time I will add some drama but it won't be sad (never) lol,

I appreciate your comments it give me energy to continue so you have to know that your opinion is important to me and I hope I can learn from you to improve my English

If you didn't read my first fic "don't play with fire"   please don't forget to check it out

Characters:

Seohyun:

She is a normal girl live in the countryside with her family she is very friendly, she has a big family a lot of friends and close with their neighbors as well, her live is simple just like the place she came from

Her family is not so rich and not boor as well, but they had a big house and have enough money to be able to have a good life  

She is very simple; she has angelic face, perfect body,she is polite and beautiful, she always wearing simple make up and simple clothes

She is smart, has a strong personality, talented, and she loved luhan since she was young

Luhan:

Handsome, arrogant, rich, playboy

His friends : kris, chanyoul,lay…

He used to go to the country side when he was young to visit their siblings, he never noticed seohyun

His grandfather is the ceo of their corporation, his dad helping his grand father, and luhan will be the next for sure

His grandfather don't like his grandson way of life he want him to change and be more responsible

He has one sister tiffany who has just finish her study in USA and came back, she was in love with kris before

They had a big fancy hose his two cousins live with them they are taeyeon and sehun as they are orphan's after the death of his uncle and his wif, so luhan,tiffany,taeyeon and sehyun lived together like brothers and sistars

The grandfather:

He is a good man, kind and loves seohyun so much since she was a kid he love her personality and her angelic face he wish that she was his own grand daughter but he consider her as his  own grand daughter, he insisted that she must live with him when she came to study in seoul , he know that she is interested in luhan, and he wish that she could change him

Tiffany:

Luhan's older sister Friendly , cheerfull, and she will be seohyun closest friend

She was in love with kris but he was a player just like luhan and that was one of the reasons why she left to USA ,she want to forget him

taeyeon:

She is the oldest , she loves her young brother sehun and care about him so much, she was like his mother

She work with her grand father in the company   

Sehun:

Playfull, childish, and very close to luhan, and his grand father always say that luhan spoiled him

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exited?

i hope you are 

if i get several comments i will update the story, i am working on it now

see you soon 

 

      

Comments

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purpleviolet94 #1
Chapter 25: Update please
julie-61 #2
Chapter 25: Update please.....
aysan-seo #3
Chapter 25: continue please this story is so good i love it , i was waiting for you to update and finally you updated hhhhh waiting for the next one please
hereandnow13 #4
Chapter 25: Continuing with it sounds good with me but if you're too busy then I will understand:)
All up to you and thank you for the update!
purpleviolet94 #5
Chapter 25: Continue. Because I love this story.
julie-61 #6
Chapter 24: Update please.......
YLYiLin #7
Chapter 24: I would like some mushy seohan scene they so cute!!
NanaJin
#8
Chapter 24: Luhan's omma will forgive seohyun right ? Grandpa so funny with his stick hehe .. im happy that seohan get back again .. btw update soon ♥♥
eugenenni #9
Chapter 24: Haha I like grandpa!!! So cute^^ Seohyun knew Luhan had hard time. I hope they will be together just now^^ Thanks for the update!!!