Breathe

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In all honesty, to Daehyun, it was somewhat like the stopping of breath.

 

 

This is a prequel in Daehyun's point of view for the story Wounds Left Open to shed some light on what Daehyun went through. There's not much symbolism and the structure is quite messy, so I decided to put it on this account as a new story instead of in Wounds Left Open. ^^ Thank you for reading and feel free to leave your thoughts! Also, this can be read on its own but it'll fairly confusing because it's based entirely on Wounds Left Open.

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chinchillas #1
Chapter 1: That was so painfully breathtaking, thanks for writing
inixaw #2
Chapter 1: reading this made all the hair on my neck stands
Jpd0824 #3
Chapter 1: Damn just damn --- now we know
BabyKT #4
Chapter 1: I'm speechless..........
Jooleun #5
Chapter 1: Hands down. Thumbs up for this.
Claudine_NG #6
Chapter 1: Oh my goodness... :''''((( You are amazing. You made Daehyun more human unlike how the other first one shows him as a monster who destroyed Youngjae and keeps coming back as if he wants to continue his torture. This story truly made me understand that Daehyun deeply loved Youngjae and he came back not only because he feels guilty but because he still loves him (even everything between them had already ended, even if Youngjae had truly lost his love for Daehyun). I love you so much for writing this. Thank you for this wonderful prequel. I thought it was the end for the other story. Anyway... since the ending of the other story was quite vague, I'll just assume that at some point they had found closure already. :3
Planetariums #7
Chapter 1: omfg after reading daehyun's side, I feel a lot sorry for him than I initially had since he was more of jerk-ish person in the first one (and he still is, but less now lol). At least daehyun is able to realize that and the consequences of his decisions. I love the ending and how he decided to run after him this time! He has learned (; v ;) (because most people don't).

And omg, how many covers of 'eyes, noes, lips' are there?? I've only like seen two and the original! ; A ; I should look this up, haha. I was secretly hoping for some reference to the song (with all the many symbolism the first one had) but this one was a lot more realistic, or per se simplier lol. Which I don't mind and I think it would be a lot longer if you did incorporate more anyway.

So, um, yeah I love this piece and your username (; u ;) /whispers I'm still waiting for Absinthe /ignore me/ lol
Bapsloli #8
After I red jae's pov, some time ago, I've been waiting for more and this is exactly what I needed..
so after they said 'we both need some fixing' I really wanna know what happened next! I love the symbolism about the eraser and the paper, it all fits so well..well up till now, all I can say is keep up the good work! Aja Author-nim Aja-Aja HWAITING!
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