A Walk In The Rain

Description

You had abandoned by your own father because you failed to do his task. Your mother had begging him but there is no used. 

 

One day on the earth, you met someone and he completely change your life.

 

Who changed your life?

 

Why are you failed during doing the task?

 

How was your life after your father chased you?

 

Want to know more? read this story .

Foreword

Hi ! i'm not good in descriping my story.

 

you want to know more?

 

keep reading it :D

 

This awesome poster credit to

Nursyuhada
the poster already done !!! check it out !!

Comments

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GreenDecember #1
Chapter 1: I'm sorry to say, too much grammar error, make me dizzy. But your story is good, just improve ur english okey? I was confused at first because u mixed past tense with presen tense....sorry for this comment..
anniedays #2
love the title