Sugar Puff

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It is gonna be a collection of YongSeo shots or drabbles. I intend to keep writing about them since I have so many thoughts about them and I need to put them into stories. I still have troubles in using the perfect words to describe anything in the stories. Please give constructive criticisms but dont be too harsh, darls. I am afraid my heart can't take it. This is purely from my own imagination. I don't copy neither plagiarize titles or stories. I may have inspirations from quotes, songs, movies or others.

 

 

Foreword

It can be very short short, or short, rarely long. I am not yet capable in writing long chapters.
 

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believerremember #1
Chapter 2: Short but sweet. Loved it a lot. Esp the "i dont mind since im yours anyway." Hope u continue to share more. Thanks for the update. ^^
rumwow #2
Chapter 2: Khheerrrrr...
My toes and fingers curl.
Give it to Jung Yonghwa to be all cheesy...
Just get married already!
meluvyuya #3
Chapter 2: awwww this is sweet :'))
kmrsanchez #4
Chapter 1: Authornim its so sad for yongs part. And I know hyun is hurting and waiting also. But I still believe in the end it will be the two of them. Thanks for the one-shot :)
i_aetzysimp #5
Chapter 1: Waaaaaaaah~ *O* You're story is very well written. I could feel a bit of their emotion and how uri Yonghwa really misses uri Hyunnie~♥♥♥

I was a bit hesitant in wanting to comment though and say my own criticisms... :/ what if I'll unintentionally offend you? :O Waah!! >< but I certainly think that you must know. There's a part of the story where your use of pronouns got confused (everyone goes through that, trust me) and there were some missing letters (your 'lot' lacked a 't') but that's the most I could see. If there were any others, my eyes probably went past them. =w=

Hmm.... another thing, try cutting the story into paragraphs. ^^ I went past through a good amount of details when scrolling down and I was shocked to find that when I reread again. :X I..ah.. (this is really childish) pouted at it. =_= I mean, how could I?!

Tsk! Anyway~ keep writing fatenism-ssi~ I see talent in you!! :D
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