Abeyance

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Rating: R - Genre: Romance/ Cheesiness / Not so much Cheesiness / Onho, mentions of JongTae, not sure where it came from.  Note: So I set out to write a short OnHo drabble that turned into ALL OF THIS. Rated R because of language because fluffballs deserve bad language too.

 

 

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Hyuuga_Heibe #1
Chapter 2: Amazing 2 shots!!!
YeouHyomie #2
This is so great, I love it. It's like the perfect length, and it just moves along at a great pace with just like perfect beginning, problem, , resolution. Nothing better than that, I'm glad it wasn't dragged out over like 30 chapters of comas and moping and angst and blerg because that is so over.

The whole tone and humour of it was great and it just goes to show that not every fic writer has to approach writing conflict like they're writing a My Chemical Romance album, it can be more lighthearted than that. Also, the description of Jinks during the TV revelation KILLED ME.Seriously, I laughed so much I choked. It suited his (as in IRL) character so well. I can see myself pouring a drink and crazily shouting The Raven at the door.

+++Bonus points for SNSD guest star. <3

For real though, it was really enjoyable, it would've been good in like... a magazine or something idk. omg I had so much to say about this, wth.
SHIN33ee #3
Love this. Love this love this love this.
lacus_clyne #4
Chapter 2: wow.... this story really great
i like the story line
awesome^^
Tigerinkage #5
You made an AFF account??? Awesome XD

Omg this is one of my fave Onho fics
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