Chapter 5: Loved the ending though. So cute and wookie is just too sweet. And well at least kyu now can ride the bike.

Chapter 1: I definitely wasn't expecting a bike scenario! XD
I really related to the frustrations that Kyuhyun felt
with not being able to ride a bike.... so I thought
it was really endearing that Ryeowook was so patient
with him and taught him :D

Wow. The plot was plain but I got stuck to how beautifully you had described the characters - it was exactly how I would imagine Ryeowook and Kyuhyun in their teens (with chubby Ryeowook, god that's the first thing that I fell for your story, most people just deny that basic fact).
I like these kind of stories, where Kyuhyun and Ryeowook are pictured as real people in their daily life, with normal human moods and flaws (some stories I came across basically sketched Ryeowook as a non-stop crybaby who can cry over silly things and Kyuhyun as a too-much-of-a-genius who knows everything in the world, haha)
You got me hooked, and the fact that I can see my life through this story just adds up to that (boyfriend thing, you know XD).
Thanks for the refreshing slice of life like this and glad you've grabbed the first place :)

Chapter 5: Aishhh! These kids always bickering about silly things! ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ But you surprised me though, I also thought wook would be skinny like he is right now. Fluffy story. Please make a sequel.

Chapter 5: Awww! *-* they are so teenagers (?) ji, a cute fight about nothing! Thanks for writing it :3

Chapter 5: Hmm. Interesting. lol It's something so very simple in it's layout since it's really not much of anything more than the ups and downs of being in a relationship but you've nailed the characters and just how out of proportion things can be blown overall. I'll agree the ending feels a bit shaky/cobbled together but the rest of it totally makes sense and flows together nicely.

I don't think I'd appreciate someone that tried to celebrate everything either but it was nice for Kyu to realize he's a bit of a curmudgeon. haha Their argument and Ryeowook's reaction to it totally had me getting all teary eyed too. Poor babies. T_T You definitely evoked some emotions there. But I can also understand Kyuhyun's reservations about learning something at sixteen that most of us take for granted automatically. >.> Even though he was super worried/embarrassed though, he did give it a really good go for Ryeowook which helps to show the strength of their relationship, even if he's not inclined to actively remember or celebrate the 'big' dates.

Kyuhyun's gift at the end felt perfect too! And I'll be quick to admit I automatically pegged Ryeowook as skinny so reading him as chubby in this was quite unexpected. lol It's possible though. He's still got time to grow into his body as it were. Oh! And I definitely cringed at Ahra's reaction when Wookie called her. Ouch. But you hit human nature on the head perfectly there too. We are so prone to lash out when we feel wronged. *face palm*

Good job overall. I enjoyed it and congrats on your placement in the contest. :)

Chapter 5: Would really find a partner that celebrates everything irritating

Chapter 5: This story was cute. Too cute. Too fluffy. To perfect for me! I love it so much. I was not expecting Ryeowook to be chubby. It's hard enough to imagine both of them and now chubby Wookie lol. It's sweet because Cho actually likes chubby Wookie! I have never read something like that. Cookies for you, and too cute you only learn to ride a book only two weeks ago. I use to know when I was little but now I don't think so. Also is the first time I see Ara playing a character so mean? I think her comment was too much, maybe she will bring problem to our Kyu & Wookie relationship. This story was too short, why are your storys so good?

Oh, this was so sweet! ;w; I really love reading fics of them being teenages, it's always so much fun!
And this was so cute, oh chubby Wookie makes me always happy I don't even know why. XD Also I can believe that trying to learn to ride a bike at the older age can be hard, and it's so weird since I have known how to ride a bike almost as long as I have know how to walk. 8DD Also the the ending was so cute, so it made sense even thou you had to re-write it!