equilibrium

Description

Our days are numbered. We exist to disappear and we live to die. No matter how many writers try to romanticize death, it will always be what it is—death. So painfully so.

Foreword

Sungjong clears his throat. Contrasting the other two, Sungjong is anything but comfortable. The two turn to face him, mechanically and synchronized. All you have to do now is figure out which one is real. It whispers. Two maniacal grins are offered to him in return.

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eseech #1
Chapter 1: THIS SOUNDS LIKE THE INTRO TO SOMETHING AMAZING AND IF YOU EVER GET THE TIME PLEASE DO CONTINUE;; having said that, i think it's a nice piece on it's own anyway. i'm not sure; i really love the ambiguous ACTION BLOCK-BUSTER FOR THE HOLIDAYS feel you've got there

urgh i LOVED the alternating voices, if voices is the right word, which switched between something of a mad scientist (say what you want, he's mad) and sungjong with hoya AND IT WAS GLORIOUS;; i think the first few sections of the mad scientist's speech to Elsa was really, really well done, and then the next few explanations of It and their relation to Hoya and the destruction of humankind REALLY WRAPPED IT WELL TOGETHER ;;A;; your writing is perfect as always, and i love how your writing style will forever be this ambiguous, more-than-what-you-say kind of work which is obviously wonderFUL IF I HAVEN'T ALREADY MADE THAT CLEAR? but basically i love your style and this story is absolutely wonderful.

seriously though i love how you chose sass and sassy as your main characters because the conversation between sungjong and hoya WAS BRILLIANT and i love how vague the idea of hoya is, and how what exactly happened isn't made clear, but there's enough to get a good outline and why the world's dying. i love your concept of oblivion, and the scene was just so perfectly set with sungjong and robot!myungyeol in some post-apocalyptic living room of the sorts? I can imagine their perfectly synchronized movements and sungjong just seems like the kind of kid surviving the close extinction of mankind that it was just ALL PERFECTLY DONE.

so please come back to the infinite fandom and write us more stories thank you! <33333
eseech #2
SSCCCCRRRREEAAAAMMMMMMMMSSSSSSSSSSS

OMG OMG OMG I AM READY FOR THIS MY BODY IS PREPARED ;;;A;;;


"No matter how many writers try to romanticize death, it will always be what it is—death. So painfully so." BBBYYYYEEE
IN FACT THE WHOLE DESCRIPTION IS JUST ;;;A;;;; THIS IS COMPLETELY UP MY ALLEY ILY <3333

//AWAITING THIS HALF IN TEARS
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