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Pending Requests: Requestor| Reviewer | Status| Story Title

 
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| bbe1989 kaihleelo | completedto the devil | i loved dearly
namu_jinan | blackrosestears | pending | Silent Messenger
fefedove | kaihleelo | completed | chateau kisses; champagne flutes
the day minseok disappeared | deedee_zelo90 | completed | kyx1994
tinyredrose | blackrosestears | working on | hell wants an angel
LilyLisa | BlackRosesTEars | completed | Of Camps and Broken hearts
itspaperkites | natocuty | COMPLETED | from three tables away
min-yung | natocuty | COMPLETED | 92 days with a jerk
-sputnik- | blackrosestears | Completed | sponateity
prettydamnwicked | blackrosestears | completed | wayward footsteps
kurono_mitsuki |blackrosestears | completed | Hold me tight
flower-of-may | kaihleelo | completed (updated) | moonshine girls, #2
kpopcrown | kaihleelo | completed | blood rose
hocbaidi | -vminatic | completed | just a cruel game
bbe1989 | kaihleelo | completed | once upon a dream
Kimmynurry | uniquestel | completed | an alpha and a yakuza
blu3wind | -vminatic | completed | the fated string
queentrelle-- | uniquestel | completed | i'll be adored
Hephaistos | natocuty | COMPLETED | The millionth time

blu3wind | natocuty & -vminatic | Completed & Completed | the fated string
btfulorelore | -Vminatic | completed | heart shot
naahrotta | kaihleeLo | completed | light as the wind
kaihleelo | uniquestel | COMPLETED | precious haru
kaihleelo | swirl_293 | completed | concealed identity
kaihleelo | -vminatic | completed | concealed identity
KAIHLEELO | natocuty | COMPLETED | CONCEALED IDENTITY
kaihleelo | deedee_zelo90 | completed | concealed identity
deedee_zelo90 | BLACKROSESTEARS | completed | The north star
c0smic | kaihleelo | completed | youth
CALEESIA | KAIHLEELO | COMPLETED | TIME IS FINITE
--SPRINGJELLY | BLACKROSESTEARS | completed | TEARS OF BLADES
--SPRINGJELLY | BLACKROSESTEARS | COMPLETED | FOUR SEASONS
VELVETMAJESTY | deedee_zelo90 | completed | DARK AND SILENT SESSIONS
VELVETMAJESTY | BLACKROSESTEARS | Completed | HIDDEN IN A DISTANCE
KJDZYX | deedee_zelo90 | completed | REMINISCENCE
DOUXSOLEIL | BLACKROSESTEARS | COMPLETED | ALLEGRO: YOUNG BLOOD AND ELECTRIC BLUE SKIES
BAPBANGME | BLACKROSESTEARS | COMPLETED | SIX DEADLY SINS
BONEOFMYSWORD | BLACKROSESTEARS | COMPLETED | THE FIRST DROPLET OF RAIN
VWIFEY | KPOPERROSE | CANCEL | AN ANGEL LIKE YOU
ALAKAN | kaihleelo | completed (updated) | CARNAL
BRAVOMYLIFE | BLACKROSESTEARS | WORKING ON | BRAVO MY LIFE THE RETURN

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Here we only feature 3 stories with a rating over 98% 

 

Dark and Silent Seasons (100%)

 

Author: velvetmajesty
Reviewer: deedee_zelo90
Story Summary: 

Baekhyun guided their hands to take each other’s shorts and underwear down, and he let them for each other’s until they reached it in unison. 

Someone must go on top of the other.

You must touch each other with love.

You can kiss and any part of your partner’s body.

Here, put your partner’s in your mouth. it all you want. That’s called .

Baekhyun also made them literate with some terms. , , snowball, pearl necklace, among others.

Four Seasons (98%)

 

Author: -Vminatic
Reviewer: BlackRosesTears
Story Summary: 

Even if you hurt me, I would still love you.
Even if you betray me, I would still want you.
Even if you push me away, I would still look for you.
Even if you hate me, I'll continue to love you from afar.

Some may call me childish, foolish or whatever bad words that describe me.
And I agree with them. I'm a fool that is in love with you.
I'm a fool in love and I know best that I won't fall out of love anytime soon.

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The first time was like the wind blowing and the maple leaves drifting down; just like a day in the Autumn.
The second time was like a drizzle while the sun was still shining brightly; just like a day in the Summer.
The third time was like a heavy rainstorm, it was like flowers and rain mixing together; just like a day in the Spring.
The fourth time was like the snow, cold and quiet with one suffering and the other enjoying; just like a day in the Winter.

Author: fefedove
Reviewer: KaihleeLo
Story Summary:

Kai, a stripper and Luhan, a janitor, are best friends and roommates. They decide to find a sugar daddy to help with the bills, and they succeed. But this throws them deeper into a life of violence, and love.

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Author: Amayla
Featured: First place from Happiness Writing Contest

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Score of 100+ Reviews from July 29, 2015 - July 29, 2016

 

Four featured stories

 

Story Title: Beast et Beauty
Author: KangminBread
Reviewer: Eunriehyun
Score: 106%
Summary (short): Some wait a lifetime to find love. Others wait for the next to live it.

Story Title: Lipstick and Mascara
Author: --SpringJelly
Reviewer: BlackRosesTears
Score: 100%
Summary (short): "Be a guy who will ruin her lipstick, not her mascara."

Story Title: Six Deadly Sins
Author: bapbangme
Reviewer: BlackRosesTears
Score: 100%
Summary (short): What do six Princes of Darkness do when they are bored? They play with humans, of course!

Story Title: Ex Cathedra
Author: vigour
Reviewer: Eunriehyun
Score: 100%
Summary (short): --

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bbe1989 #1
Chapter 290: Thank you so much for the very comprehensive review!!!
Once again you've picked up my struggle with writing dialogue... I'm still trying to work on it and will definitely keep all your well thought out advice in mind when I write stories in the future TT.
You're totally fair about the vague timeline and the wordiness, I'll also work on that in the future!!
And yes!!! Thank you for picking up on all my references!!!
I've linked and credited you on the fic and once again thank you so much for writing such an awesome objective review. Really highlights some things I can work harder on and I love it :)
fefedove #2
Chapter 289: ok, i'm finally picking the review up hehe~
wow, you said you kept this short but this is one of the more detailed reviews i've received lol. thank you so much kaihlee! to be honest, i'm really surprised that you read all of it and even upvoted the fic ajdhf;iwescd
the "chateau kisses" part in the title came from lyrics of exo's lotto. the mv for that also inspired this fic.
you have interesting takes on the characters too, which i love! it's always nice to see how other people view them. like how you described jongin as the "free" character, because i never thought about that, but you're definitely right. for luhan, i tried hinting at the beginning that he shouldn't be pitied or thought weak just because he looked innocent. there was much more to him ;) but the fact that he had been witnessing sehun killing in cold blood and wasn't new to this...omg i never thought of that wtf? lol (or maybe i did subconsciously)
okay anyway, thank you so much~ i'll definitely come back for constructive reviews once i actually write another fic haha. i've credited as well ^_^
fefedove #3
Chapter 289: Thank you so much for the review! I'll write a longer comment and credit when I'm on my laptop~
stellarstarlight #4
Chapter 246: I've always been curious about review shops. I could never do it myself. If you don't mind my asking, how did you come up with your rubric?
ramblesofthelost #5
Chapter 286: Ahhhhhh!!!! Thank you so much for doing a review - I honestly thought it wasn't going to happen when I saw your announcement. I'll probably have to re-read x3 your review because I definitely want to make improvements on my grammar mistakes. And thanks for noting about the forward too - I'm always unsure what to put there. The characters were such a challenge and I still find it that way- but I'm happy that their development is showing. Really, I'm glad you enjoyed and story and I'd love to hear your opinion on the King in the future. Thanks for taking the time to finish this! Will credit banner on the page <3
mistressdean #6
Chapter 286: Oh, no! I literally come back to aff just to read reviews, including yours. You will be missed!

On a side note, will you ever be opened to personal review requests in the future?
YX__94 #7
Chapter 285: Thank you for the review!

I feel like it was a little rushed and i can't explain such an high score since the critics are there but I'll credit you on the foreword ASAP! :)

I was also wondering if you consider cliché and overused just the starting plot or the whole story. I mean, I haven't seen fics with that kind of end so maybe I've missed them and I'd like to check them out.
kpopcrown #8
Chapter 283: My finals have finally ended and summer started, and I could finally sit down and re-read the entire review and pick it up! First of all, I am glad you enjoyed reading my story. It is true there are plot holes here and there, and I can't thank you enough for listing the days. I lost count of the days myself because it's been two years I am writing this (I'm a slow-writer). Hopefully, I'll be able to edit the entire story once I finish Blood Rose. I know my grammar skills , so thank you for pointing out the flaws! I'll make sure to tend to it soon.
Lol, I actually turned 16 this April. Omg, since you and Renee are both computer science major, am I portraying her well? xD I have no clue how a computer science major actually does lol.
I have picked up my review and once again, thank you for the review! Thank you for patiently waiting for me as well! c:
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