Before Heaven

Description

As Hoya lies upon a pool of blood, his head throbbed to an unbearable pain. Squinting his eyes with difficulty, he sees the green man still flashing in a distance, mimicking the momentum of the sharp soreness he feels from his toes to his neck, sending haphazard signals to his brain.

 

So this is itthis is how I’m going to die at a young age of 25, Hoya thinks to himself. It might be due to oblivion or the fact that he was too tired to care about the crowd forming around him, shouting words that he could not hear, but Hoya shuts his eyes and all of a sudden his body is engulfed by a wave of numbness.

 

Someone is giving me CPR. He could feel his lips being parted carefully as his chest pumps to the rhythmic compressions given by his rescuer. Images of the people he loved and those who loved him flashes across his mind as Hoya weakly inhales the air passing through his mouth, tasting a hint of peppermint candy in his rescuer’s breath.

 

Funny, because his mind does an instant image slideshow of three people he knew who loved that minty candy as well…

Foreword

This story is based very loosely on 'The Five People You Meet In Heaven'.

It's my first Fanfiction so I'd really appreciate feedback and comments, whether good or bad. It's going to be a chaptered Fanfiction, I'm halfway through writing it and I'd like to see the response before I decide if I should continue. So please comment! 

It's Hoya-centric revolving around his relationship with 3 different Infinite members, but don't worry there won't be any complicated web sort of relationship among them. They're going to come out separately in different chapters and timelines (if this makes sense).

Only the story is mine, I do not own the members (I wish I do) or anything else.

Thank you. 

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blueangel_plt #1
Chapter 6: I love this so much. I think it's the second time I've read your story. It's nice. Please cb soon
MissPanda16 #2
Chapter 6: Wouah, just love how the three lovers entered in Hoya's life, I really enjoy reading this story, it was nice^^
Thank you for writting it, see you~
<3
violetrina
#3
Chapter 6: all three with peppermint candy? How sweet..
i like it anyway. thank you for making this such story. I enjoy it.
Jowha!
bndlesspssblities #4
Chapter 6: Part 2:
I'm not sure if the next chapter will be a final one, but Howon in this story, was always faced with tough choices. It should be interesting what will happened next. I get the sense that Howon was always in a conflict, not really living the life that he'd always wanted. A sense of responsibility (perhaps towards his family), or maybe fear (?) has always dictate him. A point was highlighted at the final part of chap.6; if he were to die, who would he missed most? I wonder how that thought will influence him....
Good luck with your writing, and I can't wait to see what happened, and I would answer who his lover would be, but.... I'm going to keep it to myself...hehe... You tell me author... ^^
bndlesspssblities #5
Chapter 6: I should really quit my habit of not commenting on stories that I enjoyed... I'm such a terrible reader, really... I thought that I had commented at least once, but yeah...found out today that I haven't. Sorry bout that...
Anyhow, I've anticipated an update for this story for so long, and I'm glad that you finally updated it. I really, really love the way you narrate the story. The idea of instances that stood out in the face of death is fascinating to me. I guessed it speaks to the power of memories really; memories and its meaning, how emotions can strengthen our recollection of things...And also, it taps into the paralyzing influence of fear, and how it can drives you to fight through, or to escape in the face of reality...hehe... I'm studying psychology and cog.neuroscience, so...this sort of thing has always been interesting to me. But I guess, I also value the philosophy behind it. Stories and narration like this makes you think about the bigger picture in life; which I always appreciate when it comes to reading.
I find Hogyu's story to be really adorable... and relatable. First crush will always take a huge part of ur life, don't they? hehe...It literally made me think of my first crush... And like Howon, I also remember that little moments, and encounters I had with him... Then Yadong, and the realistic conflict Howon has to face. I'd never experienced that in real-life, but I guessed it's a very possible event for any at that age. They were at a crossroad in life. And sweet, adorable wooya's first encounter... Sweet, greasy wooya development.... Gargh, I live on sickeningly sweet romances..hehe...
WG0802 #6
Chapter 6: WOOYA!! Please let it be woohyun~<3<3
rhe3a_1891 #7
Chapter 6: Oh thank you 4 your comeback ... ^^
nonno1301
#8
Chapter 6: Nah ah thanks for updating >w<
Ohhhh gawd I'm a hardcore WooYa shipper urggggg please the lover is WooHyun please please please....
You asked any guesses, I guess it's WooHyun kekeke :)))) actually that's not guessing it's just me wanting right... ._.
Please let it be WooHyun and update soon...
nanadya #9
Chapter 6: Thanks for updating !!!