Train Crush
Description
Hello! After reading many stories here on AFF I finally found the courage to post this here. It is actually my first story and it's inspired by a song I really like in Spanish called "Jueves". Constructive criticism and thoughts on the story are welcomed. Don't be to harsh on me please!! >.<
It'll be a two-shot and I'll post it as soon as I can, which will probably be in the next couple of days. I really hope you guys like it! :D
Update 12/Oct/2014: I will be using this story to enter the: After the Ice Melts, Flowers Will Bloom Once Again // A Writing Contest . ^.^
Thanks for reading! Love you<3
Credits to the owner of the background picture.
Foreword
Summer break is unfortunately over and today is the first day of my life as a senior in high school. Nothing is different, it's a silent morning on the train to school. It's still around 6:45am and the train is mostly empty.
As I'm patiently waiting to arrive to school I put on my headphones and begin listening to upbeat music so I don't fall asleep and miss my stop. I lean my head back, close my eyes and begin to hum along silently.
A couple of minutes later the train stops once again to load and unload some passengers. For some unknown reason I open my eyes and see a really handsome guy taking a seat across me.
He puts his backpack on his lap while looking at something on his phone. I can't help staring at him, he is simply perfect. I've never seen him on this train before, I'm sure of it, I would've noticed him for sure.
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