The Bad Fairytale

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"I know this world is not perfect,
            but as long as you are here,
                        it will be a fairytale to me"

I do not own this story, I am writing the translations for it because it is a really beautiful story that I want to share with everyone. There may be grammar and other English mistakes, but I will try my best.
original story from http://tieba.baidu.com/p/3006240619     author: http://tieba.baidu.com/home/main?un=%84%A2%8C%A8%DC%B0%A5%EB&fr=pb

To represent the characters' thoughts/asides, I will use brackets [ ]. 
 

I CHANGED THE RATING BECAUSE ONLY A FEW SCENES NEED THE M RATING, SO IF YOU'RE UNCOMFORTABLE WITH IT, FEEL FREE TO JUST SKIP IT ^0^

Foreword

As Zhang Yi Xing stands in front of the majestic mansion in his casual outfit and backpack, he cannot help but to take a deep breath. 
Gathering up the minimal amount of courage he manages to find, he steps up to knock on the door. Quickly, a deep, cold voice responds through the interphone, "Who is this?" 
"I... I am Zhang Yi Xing, I came to find my aunt..." 
"Zhang Xiao Qian?"
"Yes.Yes.Yes." [Seems like I found the right place.]
"Come in through the side door." The responder then turns off the interphone.  


Strolling through the maze-like gardens, Zhang Yi Xing scratches his head as he has trouble finding his way.
[Wow. This place is truly huge. Much bigger than our farmland back in the countryside...Maybe I should just ask someone for help.]


Zhang Yi Xing looks around and suddenly a shadow enters his field of vision. The person was sitting calmly by the water fountain, his head slightly tilted as he observes the fish's swift motions.
Zhang Yi Xing happily jogs to him and asks, "Excuse me, you live in this house, right?" 
The person remained in the same position, with his back facing Zhang Yi Xing, Zhang  Yi Xing thought he didn't hear the question, so he lightly tapped the stranger's shoulders... 
[How should I describe this face? Beautiful? Refined?... He's clearly only a young adult, but he has a face that can make all the girls jealous, but... the look in his eyes... it's so cold that it can give its viewers goosebumps.]
"You... look really nice," Zhang Yi Xing says unmindfully....

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shane00 #1
Chapter 5: When are you going to update? btw, you have a omega awesome story plot.
Coregurlz
#2
Chapter 5: So Great!!! I have been waiting for this kind of fic to show up! Especially when Lay,my fav becomes the main character of this fic. *^▁^* thanks for sharing!
wollen #3
Chapter 5: hey, I noticed that you put kray tag in your story, so I wonder who and when?
Btw, your story is interesting, and all my favorites lay's ships are here.
I'm looking forward for the next chapter.. :-*
aryetta
#4
Chapter 5: While im more of a layhan shipper ing/layhun holds a special place for me so this is like the best of both worlds :) Good job, have a nice day ^^
unicorn1991
#5
Chapter 5: Wow the story is amazing....keep updating pls....I like both layhan and layhun....they are so cute together, and now Luhan is not in exo I think this two will be more close. Co'z they both close to Luhan..hehehe
pearl_red #6
Chapter 5: I can't make a choice between ing or Layhan. (╥_╥)
Update soon! <3
AleSchizophrenia
#7
Chapter 5: I think I'm the only one who is expecting this story to be ing (selay, layhun?) ;w;
I just ship them so hard, gosh.

But seriously though, I want to see what's Luhan's deal in this, he's just too weird. Ah.
layhan25 #8
Chapter 4: oooohhhh...sehuna how sweet u r ! and luhan is so creepy hahahahahahaa
i think he is really into yixing ~ i think layhan will get into the seen soon.
and i ship layhan , i wish they will be together soon <3
plz update soon
simplyMyself #9
I will update at least once or twice next week because I'm going to be on Thanksgiving break! :)
layhan25 #10
Chapter 3: i'm defiantly supporting layhan !!
i see that sehun fall for lay also 'smirking'
plz update soon