He Is My First...

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Minseok is helping his boyfriend, Lay, pack up his things to get ready to move into his new house within the next few hours. He comes across a thin black journal that he begins to read out of curiosity. The special moments shared between the two, is relived in the pages. And the questions that Minseok has been holding back, is all falling into place. 

Foreword

The words lingered in Minseok's mouth. He wanted to say it. He wanted to say it so bad. But, he couldn't. Not if Lay hadn't said it yet. 

Does he love him? Or does he not feel the same way? 

 

 

I am writing a 7 chapter (intro not included) 7-shot. This is a romancey, lovey dovey story of xiulay. I'm not a hard shipper of the otp, but I've decided to give it a try. I actually finished writing everything in one day because that's how bored out of my mind I am. Anyways, please enjoy the story. 

 

Each chapter is Lay's diary entry, but I take it back to the exact memory (Minseok reminiscing, but the POV is constantly changing). 

 

< Ayi = term for an older woman who is respected by the speaker (mandarin) >

 

 

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KimMaabo #1
Chapter 6: I just read this and its interesting how you made it. Will you update this please? I really am curious ahout how this will end and i am hopping for an haooy ending as well.~
Husna95 #2
Chapter 5: Ooo please .. I just started this today and I really want this to have a happy ending .. looking forward for the update , , pretty pleaseee ^^
blue_ALV #3
Chapter 5: this story is really interesting and heart warming. the pair XiuLay is rarely used but l could not have imagined a better pairing for your story. You have chosen well and the characters, main pair XiuLay and concept just all fitted perfectly.

Well done and looking forward to the update.
Loveiscomplicated #4
This is so cute~~ I love to read it <3
HimitsuLov #5
Chapter 5: I'm happy for the chapter, lol I was like Kris, I tought they were dating, silly me. So Luhan is going to cause jealousy? or they are only going to be bff?. They are so cute~ Thanks for updating!
HimitsuLov #6
Chapter 4: Oh Minseok, it's sad to witness that but yeah! Xiulay kiss, I'm happy that every turned good (lol even if we all know they are together). And Kris coming to their date I really loved this chapter, thanks for update!
HimitsuLov #7
This story is so good! I hope you will continue it
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