Chapter 1: ohhh my feelings came rushing back. ahh this is so good, it's amazing!! a great one-shot and it encapsulates the tom jerry very well at the beginning, each line, each bicker - even when they're on top of each other and bomi lets out she thinks chorong is beautiful, it goes back to bickering about the shower. AHH everything in between is sweet and hurts me in that good way since I'm rereading hehe. their feelings especially bomi's feelings and behaviour with the members, damn written well. her lines with chorong were full of emotion in a simple way, I love it so much!! when the scene is just over in one line and outburst, hhh I just feel good. this is soft and cute where it hurts but it's good! thank you for writing this <3
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