Chapter 1: I hope next time you would use another font for your story, this is kinda hard to read. But I manage to read it until the last word, teehee. The beginning is well written, I really like when you write something what is not too slow and full of surprise. I think everything is fine to me at their first meeting, but from the 2nd time until the end, it's really fast for me. I would be happier if you add a few more thing, or some unforgettable memories between Jinki and Minho. Anyway, I'm looking for your next story since I really love your idea XD
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