When I'm Gone

Description

A glimpse into the future means gaining the chance to say goodbye.

Foreword

I have wide eyes you say. And I'm guessing my eyes are wide enough to see the future, though I haven't considered it as a gift until now, when it feels like everything hangs on a loose thread and it needs just a wrong decision to have everything fall apart. I can't let that happen.

 

Written for: The 5 Senses Writing Contest
Prompt: Sight

 

Reviewed by: Mental Breakdown Reviews

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XanLuvly_08 #1
Chapter 1: I just found this story and I'm like why why why did i find it only now xD This is so awesome~ And I'm extremely happy about how you chose to end it. It might be a bit confusing for some, but i just think it's perfect. It saved me from ugly sobbing ( sorry i am very emotional T.T). You have an amazing gift, so keep writing <3
Isadora_Quagmire #2
Chapter 1: Oh my hades this was phenomenal. The idea was simply... ide have any appropriate words to award you waits this is too fantastic *___*
Gangerginger #3
Chapter 1: Hi. I'm your reader. ^^. I love your fic. Can I transplate it into Vietnamese , please ? Can I? Pleaseeeee
Channie-chan-chan #4
Chapter 1: Great story! But I'm kind of confused about some parts...
So I get that Kyungsoo has the gift to see the future but I kind of got lost at the middle. So kyungsoo had a vision that he was gonna die or that Jongin was good die? And I don't understand the ending....did he and Jongin both die or was that whole thing a vision???
Sorry if I have a lot of questions I just wanna clarify some parts of the story HAHHAHA
NotAppropriate #5
Chapter 1: This gave me goosebumps. I'm sorta confused...but I absolutely loved the twist in the end which surprised me!
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