Chapter 6: Asdfghjkl
I was so happy you wrote this.
I didn't expect the lady to be so bold but I nearly whistled and went "yasssss!" so much here

Chapter 5: This is interesting. It's a nice subversion of paradigm. For once it is the guy enthralled and the girl in charge and it is a breathe of fresh air to read.
I hope you write more stuff like this!
I thought I had commented before but my account has other plans about posting my comments (-_-+)

Chapter 5: Oh, dayum.
I don't see no struggle, because the flow is so smooth and . . . well, pleasant!
I pictured it all in sepia though. Even prettier. :P
This is good stuff, hyunggie.
Now go work your magic on Taekwoon, Minah. :3

I reread the first chapter *_*
So pretty *_*
Hugs .////.

Chapter 4: I hate you. I swear I hate you! I'm not even going to soothe this with a "I love you" because I really hate you!

I hate Zhang Yixing! I hate Cho Ara and I hate very blasted person in this fic except for the awesome Amaya T____T lemme hug you, you poor baby *squishes*

On a side note, this really is a well written fic and I loved the flow of it :)
While I respect your decision to not turn it into a Cinderella story, I still hate you T___T

Chapter 4: *cries and tries not to flood the room*
Zhang Yixing you blind idiot.
I do not like anyone else anymore.

Chapter 4: I hate you for writing this.

I really, truly do.

This is beautifully written, no doubt about that.

But I hate you.

*curls up in a ball and dies sobbing*

Chapter 3: finally donghae strikes a score
and a brilliant one at that :P
trapping feisty lady and all that jazz

the real question is does minseok's consent even matter? :P

:)))))))))))))))

nicceeeeee